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Review: The System Awakens: Rise of the Champion
(2.5)
1mo

Hahahaha yeah.....no. This story reminds me why i hate Primal Hunter. Meet Damian. Who ticks all the edgy MC box (for me personally)

✅Ruthless no nonsense personality

✅The world is full of jerks so i become one too

✅Murderhobo but with 'good' intentions (but tbh he doesn't really care that much abt the cause)

✅POWEEERRR (everything in my life have no meaning if i don't flex my 'Alpha' energy

✅Chasing woman? NO! They must be the one who chase me. They lust over me, not the pther way around (haha jokes on u bcs i'm horny too it's just these woman are so beneath me so therefore they should be the one forcing themselves to me)

✅Idk, i'm sick almost die and now i'm the strongest so i'm allowed to be arrogant

Hahahaha, yeah i hate him. I tried, but maybe chapter 94 where my last strings of reason prevail. Plot is kinda interesting tho, world building is also good, grammar is okay, but god the MC is so edgy i can't stand him. 

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Review: I Fabricated the Techniques, but my disciple really mastered them?
(3)
1mo

It's alright. Despite being an obvious mtl it's still readable. For the comedy, it's a hit or miss i suppose. I don't find this hilarious just ok, maybe the comedy didn't hit well for me.

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Review: Shattered Innocence: Transmigrated Into a Novel as an Extra
(2)
1mo

If there's anything i learned today that is to not put too much trust on this site rankings. God what even i'm reading. This story is on a par level with spanish telenovela. Things are just straight up dumb, how am i supposed to take these things seriously? Like come on, all the characters, they're so idiotic there's literally no in between. Even TAPOV early chapters are not as atrocious as this. Bfftt, if u're new to the 'extra got transmigrated' trope this might feel like a cheetoz after fasting for seven days. For me personally, this goes straight to the dumpster of fire.

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Review: I Can See Through All Things' Information
(3)
1mo

Story is good but just until up a certain point. After that the story is just abt MC bulldozing his way crushing his enemies and the powerhouses. He become a murderhobo (i said what i said). The world in this story only contain 2 kinds of people. The first one is the one that kind to MC and have no spark of evil therefore they're MC friends. The second one is evil or stand on MC way so no matter the circumstances MC gotta kill. The distinction is just so bad, it's practically a black and white, no in between. Side chara is so so. Few got chara development. We don't know their stories, their motives, all we know that everyone wants to get stronger and that's all that matter.

This story have so much potential but it got killed by MC character. The more he got stronger the more i hate him. Even when i know he is kind towards his 'friends', his actions towards everything is just too maddening to read. Just bcs the world full of jerks doesn't mean you have to become one. I mean srsly. Like at that point where he eliminate those monks sect and killed all it's disciple, you cannot convince me that there's not a single good person there. It's just way too stupid. And yeah, you also cannot convince me that there's not a single bad person from MC village.

The clear seperation between good and bad are just too comical and unrealistic (god what did i hope for, for f sake this is fiction). Idk, it's hard to take this story seriously when we are forced to have MC as the moral compass of the story. He is the law, the judge and the executor. So, don't doubt him bcs MC is always right. Yep, that's why the story just doesn't sit well with me.

I give it a 3/5 tho, purely bcs i like the beginning and to the middle of the story. Rest is just...well, no

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Review: Immortality Through Array Formations
(3.5)
3d

Surprisingly quite good. I would love to give this a solid 4 but the mtl butchered it. If this story is translated properly i might give it a 4.5. Our MC Mo Hua is such a delight for my heart, he is innocent but not naive, he's kind but not stupid, he's smart, he loves and treasures all the people around him, not to mention he can be hilariously funny from time to time. So witty, i love his character. It's been a long time I enjoyed a read where the main character carries the whole story. Not saying the side character is bad. There are in fact some fun side chara and i do enjoy MC interaction with them. I laugh and cried, not sure how, considering how bad this mtl is but i did cried. Despite the ugly translation, this story managed to wreck me. Though ofc i have to critique some parts. The filler of this story is going to be massive (i read the raws), i can't help but to grumble bcs it feels like we're going round and round instead of reaching the destination. So in terms of progression, this story is a slow burn (and yes it frustrates me). You'll see bunch of mini villain up ahead, bunch of mini arc, and well my advice, u just got to be patient.

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Review: Cultivation is just so scientific!
(2.5)
16h

Just mediocre. Basically MC arrive in 15 year old child body with a mainframe of super computer as it's cheat. The plot progress fine actually but i myself do not find joy or whatsoever reading it. MC is so painfully boring, he just want immortality and that's it. He's not evil, he's not that good either, he's just there. At first he said that he want to bring change to the world, bcs with his cheat he can level up the tech in this world up par with his previous world, THEN EVERYTHING CHANGE in a snap when he encounter a cultivator. He though "oh yeah i died before, not doing that again", so he embarks on the journey to live forever. I ask myself, is his reason valid? Yeah, i mean sure everyone wants immortality, but is his journey make me sympathize with him, make me want ro root for him? Not at all. He said that he cared for the father of his host body but yeah dude failed showing that he cared for his dad. Said that he can't stand people suffering and yet his action is entirely for selfish purpose so far. He thought it was pity but truthfully, he doesn't really care anything. He care about himself, first and foremost. Everything he does that does not benfit him is just like an act of charity he does once in a while. This is yet another story where the world is full jerks so MC become one too.

The author clearly failed to make me actually care for the protagonist. His character? boring, his motive? Also boring, and the whole plot? Just so so. Idk, this my personal opinion. If you like mc that's smart, have a cheat, solely focused on his goal, and i may add with the most boring personality ever the maybe you'll like this one. 

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