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1mo
Why is no one talking about how awful the conversation is? You were forced to be in the 3rd person perspective all the time. My guess is that probably the author don't know how to make a cohesive conversation.
And also, the original character personality is so out of place.
What the hell did i just read. It is incomprehensible.
The main character is so pushy. Everytime pepper pots near tony stark, the main character would 100% push pepper with a suggestion to f*ck tony. It is extremely annoying. And it's only 1 female character example, imagine the same thing happen to all female character in mcu.