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Erika

I like how this author think that gege fcked up the jjk story and he could make jjk story better, but ended up making far worse story than the original.

Self centered mc, other character is either bootlicker or a btch to fck. And yeah, he supposed to make a better jjk story. What a laughable delusion.

It started abruptly without any background information, and suddenly you got bunch of system notification of gibberish level up realm.

It has 3k chapter, i expected a little bit better. But i just withstand 4 chapter and can't go on. It is extremely generic and the system is a*s. I don't know if it's the translation fault or it is the writing style, but the conversation is bad.

I want to give this the lowest star but it is against my principle, that is to read at least a hundred chapter before giving a review.

It's getting worse, the translation.

Is this the translation f*ck or author f*ck? The name of the character is different everytime, except for itachi.

This is why chinese must learn some japanese name before making fanfic about japanese stuff.

Bad smut in the middle of climax battle against moryo. He fucked up.

What did i told you, first he mention otsusuki teuchi and now he is defending indecisive corruptor. Haiya.

Oh no, otsusuki teuchi again. This novel is absolutely going to be a garbage of radioactive poison.

It's so out of place. Dumbledore personality became weird.

And i also think that author didn't know how to write a conversation. Every dialogue feels lika a 3rd person. It's so erratic man.

Nice, author.