Harry Potter: The Ring Maker

Why is no one talking about how awful the conversation is? You were forced to be in the 3rd person perspective all the time. My guess is that probably the author don't know how to make a cohesive conversation.

And also, the original character personality is so out of place.

It was a good book up to about 70% of the main. Then as I realised the author screwed up, started stirring the vlennen even more as a result literally finished the book in 100 chapters or so.It's sad. Because the book had good potential but unfortunately because of stupidity it turned out the way it did. I advise you to read it but don't get your hopes up much

One of the best fanfics I've read I have not read any Harry Potter fan fic so I can't strictly comment on that but fanfic wise it's really good

Though the ending is bit rushed 😕 so it's more like a 4/5 mostly because of having a great power system as well as actually having a great crafting system which not a lot of stories have .

It's overall a great read and I loved it

Ona off note this author's works are actually really good so if you like this story you would like his other works

This is one of the first fanfics I have ever read and I really enjoyed it. From now on I will be basing how good other fanfics are off of this one. Keep up the good work.

This is a fanfic that is really worth reading. despite his system being poorly made shit that serves almost nothing other than forging knowledge, the author still managed to make the story cool to read.