For f*ck's sake, he's at least a mid 5-Star that killed a 6-Star before. Why the f*ck is he getting injured? Yeah, one core is sealed, but he was never reliant on mana in the first place. It was his Pure Sword Skill. The inconsistency is fucking annoying.
It wasn't ground-breaking, and you need ignore quite a lot, but it was okay.
Also, I wouldnt have wrote Lia like that. It was a great moment for them evolve their relationship. It was always too fast, too trusting in my view. It would've been interesting if Lia decided to leave him. Because this was far too cruel to her. The fucker only cares abt himself and his goals. He treats Lia like a 'get out of jail free' card. And its irritating that she just lets him walk all over her.
Ive always been confused. The author says that [Devourer of Stars] & [Flames of Equinox] are opposing forces. But the MC literally uses them as the the same way. <The Black Starlight> is the Void & <The Black Flames> are an all-consuming Fire. They're both things that destroy or absorb. They're not opposing, they're both [Yin] attributed. His whole build seems stupidly imbalanced, or not explained properly. There's barely any Yang elements and its overwhelmingly Yin.
And don't give me 'the cat balances him out'. They've clearly stated that he needed a balance inside his core to even begin cultivating this technique.
While the characters have their own unique backstories, they seem 1 dimensional in their interactions. All of the seem to react in the same way, albeit slight differences. Actually, they all somehow have the same personality? Its annoying because they're obviously different characters but the author just decided on a template and only changed a few minor things. And the dialogue. Its quite repetitive. It also drags on for way too long. It doesn't serve a purpose anymore after a certain point, so its a little annoying to read.
MC is charming tho. Ill give you that. The dialogue did made me grin quite often, even when it was cringey. He has witty personality that has comeback for everything. Its a decent read. Worldbuilding is meh. Not enough descriptions. Story is fine, but Im 600 ch in and what was supposed to be an academy novel hasn't even started yet. Writing isn't great but not unreadable either. It's a work in progress.
For f*ck's sake, he's at least a mid 5-Star that killed a 6-Star before. Why the f*ck is he getting injured? Yeah, one core is sealed, but he was never reliant on mana in the first place. It was his Pure Sword Skill. The inconsistency is fucking annoying.
Ahh s*it. This was bound to happen. I just wish it was on his terms. He should've had the new identity as Luca, and left Lucavion.
Please censor that name, thank you. She a b*tch.
Wooo Isolde is coming back!!!
Was Is**** fucking the the crown prince of the Lorian Empire or the Arcanis Empire?
I hope they all die a miserable death.
It wasn't ground-breaking, and you need ignore quite a lot, but it was okay.
Also, I wouldnt have wrote Lia like that. It was a great moment for them evolve their relationship. It was always too fast, too trusting in my view. It would've been interesting if Lia decided to leave him. Because this was far too cruel to her. The fucker only cares abt himself and his goals. He treats Lia like a 'get out of jail free' card. And its irritating that she just lets him walk all over her.
Ive always been confused. The author says that [Devourer of Stars] & [Flames of Equinox] are opposing forces. But the MC literally uses them as the the same way. <The Black Starlight> is the Void & <The Black Flames> are an all-consuming Fire. They're both things that destroy or absorb. They're not opposing, they're both [Yin] attributed. His whole build seems stupidly imbalanced, or not explained properly. There's barely any Yang elements and its overwhelmingly Yin.
And don't give me 'the cat balances him out'. They've clearly stated that he needed a balance inside his core to even begin cultivating this technique.
Its so confusingly written.
Oh....f*ck. Did not see that coming.
Ah so that's what was bothering me. It does feel like AI, in the way it's repetitive.
def a good way to get people to read this a.i trash
While the characters have their own unique backstories, they seem 1 dimensional in their interactions. All of the seem to react in the same way, albeit slight differences. Actually, they all somehow have the same personality? Its annoying because they're obviously different characters but the author just decided on a template and only changed a few minor things. And the dialogue. Its quite repetitive. It also drags on for way too long. It doesn't serve a purpose anymore after a certain point, so its a little annoying to read.
MC is charming tho. Ill give you that. The dialogue did made me grin quite often, even when it was cringey. He has witty personality that has comeback for everything. Its a decent read. Worldbuilding is meh. Not enough descriptions. Story is fine, but Im 600 ch in and what was supposed to be an academy novel hasn't even started yet. Writing isn't great but not unreadable either. It's a work in progress.
Overall 6.5/10