The author it pretty good! I noticed that only a minor few plot developments were lost or not expanded on. This genre is extremely difficult to write, and even more difficult to avoid predictability. My major critique is that the main character isn’t using the pinball/bullet/ball space nearly as effectively. The start of the novel is very enjoyable. I thought that this novel would end up downhill from there, but the cultivation arc has revived my interest.

Currently, I’m on chapter 424. I’m sad to know that there are only around 200 chapters left.

This novel has some major glibersnacking for a specific audience, although i still "dropped" it. I may come back to to read this masterful work, as i've read 653 chapters after all. Read it unless you really need romance and/or weak flabby MCs :/

I’m on chapter ~1700 but stopped reading because I’m burned out from reading so much of this novel at once. Somehow the author can progress the story without making the mc too overpowered and at the same time making everything feel substantial.

One thing that might be a turn off for some is that the mc always gains stuff without losing out on anything, but personally I find that satisfying, this is a fantasy after all.

The one star review is not to be trusted, imo who reviews something and has half of the review being ‘I don’t remember if …’ 💀 if you don’t remember the story well why are you reviewing it dog

Anyway that dude probably got annoyed somewhere and forgot the whole story then left a half baked review.

Love that there is no romance or Pokémon collection of random characters.

TLDR Anyways, the title is a bit misleading, no spoilers but the progression is top notch. Id read it if you mildly like semi op action stuff. Its not brainlessly op, the mc has a brain

The characters in this novel fall into two: either woman who love the mc for no reason at all, and literally everyone else who makes fun of the mc. The unmysterious weird black clothed woman sending him zombies is just so forced.

also, people abuse the mc at every turn. It's not even a face slapping trope, the mc just lets people humiliate him, then lets them call the cops without defending himself.  

This novel isn't fully normal, nor is it fully porn. It doesn't cater to either audience. 

I guess this could be readable, but I believe that whoever reads this will become dumber and more restricted in the ways they think. 

the only think I noticed that the author did somewhat well is the power structure so far, as his ability doesn't automatically make him invincible. But then again, the author won't give the mc any time to grow, between s*x scenes and being humiliated. 

Mc, seriously, even if your an idiot and can't protect your rights, lawyer up. The lawyer can think on your behalf. Lol

ok, so I'm editing my review. While the start of this novel isn't good at all, the later chapters are somewhat okay. The writing here feels like ChatGPT 3.5 wrote the whole thing with no human review.

 Previous review: 

 half star rating-This doesn't deserve a 4 star rating, so I'm giving it half a star to lower the average. 

so, my preference in novels for things to be logical, and secondly, have a reasonable probability for stuff. If the author makes the Mc draw the best whatever in first try everytime, that's fine, but- it has to be explained. This is very important. If the story makes me feel like the author is dumb, I won't like it. 

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 really bad novel. ignore the emojis. Oh, also, the cover seems to be made using ai, which doesn't automatically make it bad, but it just looks low effort. 

I liked the premise of this novel, but the terrible translation mixed with weirdly explained or outright incorrect science made me cringe too much. 

I abhor the battle competition scenes. Even the pacing isn't great, it's too slow imo. 

if your fortunate enough to be able to turn off your brain, specifically your scientific literacy, you might like this story. Otherwise, the only demographic that would make sense for this novel would be science fiction loving kids. 

I second phat tan with the negative review. Mcs being controlled by weird women is a trope that needs to stop. It's really weird, there is no reason to have this kind of cliche for a romantic sub-plot. The authors who indulge this plot progression are projecting their weird tastes onto their readers. 

If this novel is somehow turned into a food, then it would probably have to be done with great skill and knowledge of however it would take for it to be done. 

I've read over 900 chapters so far, so you can tell I like this novel.

But- i find it apparent that later on in the novel, the author found it too difficult to continue with the uniquely written story. Suddenly, the novel became a semi-generic cultivation-world novel towards the end. 

i won't give any spoilers, but even my half asleep brain could find some inaccuracies and minor plot holes. You can push through it since the author gives you something to expect. But after getting the major item that everything was building to, it was underwhelming. i recommend you read this novel, but expect the initial premise to change.