One Planet for Everyone! Building Science and Technology Civilization at the Beginning

This is a good novel but there are many problems with it, my main problem is the lack of exposition to explain what the world is like (World building is bad). Due to that there are many assumptions that need to be made. Other than that there are translation issues. Pacing is also an issue, while I understand it sometimes but others it feels like the author is repeating the same thing over and over again. Another issue is the Chinese type low effort aura farming that happens is poorly written. The planet development is fun to read but the competitions are mid for me most of the time. The concept of the novel is a 10/10 but the execution is a 6.5/10.

Here is some head canon plot corrections (and some just clarification) that explain some of the things that happen:

Middle school = High school

Assume he is in the final year of high school and that is when they all awaken their planets and have 3 months to prepare for their college exams.

Using his system he is able to know the perfect environment to create a natural planet similar to earth. It allows him to create a world with no world ending virus or other conditions which allows him to speed up time without worry. It also allowed him to choose his energy within the ordinary grade (You usually get a random energy of your planet grade). The awaking is random and different for every person but for some reason people that were popular before get better planet sizes so there might be a way to get a head start by buying more origin energy of something of the like.

The place that he is reincarnated in is never specified so I created my own idea of it to fit some of the things that are revealed. I imagine it as a separate dimension where humans get to become demigods. When they awaken a planet they create a planet in a parallel dimension with the gateway to it being your mind. When you die others can claim this gateway but they don’t claim your right to godhood of that planet. If no one claims it, anyone can enter if they get to a matching area in their own dimension.

The reason why being a planet master has any significance is because you can bring out the materials and knowledge that you gain on the planet but you can only put something in (other than origin energy) is by sealing it in a crystal by a high ranking planet master. Planet masters get stronger physically along with their planet (and maybe even get longer life or other powers).

The knowledge of the planets is widely used, mainly talismans and formations of the immortal civilizations. By doing so they didn’t develop with science and don’t think highly of the path. Guns are mentioned once in this world but it’s later stated that they don’t know what gun powder is so it’s safe to say that they don’t have guns but maybe something similar.

there are other things that don't make sense like his refusal to actively help his civilization and the weird scientific timeline.

This is my review from chapter 235 and I plan to continue reading. Although I rated it a 6.5, with my head canon I would say my enjoyment is a 7.5 - 8 range.

Could be interesting, but the lower quality translation make this far less enjoyable than it could be. The author also seems to be wavering on how he want to conduct the plot. Other than that it's absolutely terrible 

I liked the premise of this novel, but the terrible translation mixed with weirdly explained or outright incorrect science made me cringe too much. 

I abhor the battle competition scenes. Even the pacing isn't great, it's too slow imo. 

if your fortunate enough to be able to turn off your brain, specifically your scientific literacy, you might like this story. Otherwise, the only demographic that would make sense for this novel would be science fiction loving kids. 

Could be interesting, but the lower quality translation make this far less enjoyable than it could be. The author also seems to be wavering on how he want to conduct the plot.

Best Kingdom building novel I have ever read, its a nice novek, though there are some mistakes, but they are manageable.I've got a few things to teach you. What I'm about to give you is some peak wisdom. Think of it as my T Commandmts: One, never trust a b*tch with red hair. Trust me on this. Two, the pull-out game is not a real thing. She will get pregnant. Three—"

"F-Father…"

" —Never get yourself more than one wife. It sounds fun. It is fun. But it's truly a nightmare. You better be writing this stuff down. This is some grade-A wisdom right here. Four.

"...Please stop talking…" The Prince pleaded.

"Shhhhh. Just let this happ. Four…Bro's before hoes isn't a thing. The hoes come first. Remember, Booty is more important than Wa— "

"STOP!!!!!"

In the beginning this book or novel was very interesting I like the concept and it had enough chapters that I was able to be engaged but then after awhile I started to notice a pattern of repeating concepts and then they just added a Chinese version of one piece like didn’t even try to hide it The last straw was the obsidian ability fruit user like look up what obsidian is and does under even the slightest amount of force. Hint: very brittle

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One of the best nove I have ever read. I am totally satisfied with the novel and am now reading the Chinese version. This novel is that good, but it does have some problems, like, for example, the MC world is almost nonexistent. The world-building is really poor, but it seems the author was solving it in later chapters, so I guess there is no problem then.

It's not really one of those amazing masterpieces, but it totally fits my taste. There are a few annoying mistakes here and there, but nothing too crazy. The main character lacks personality until around chapter 400, which really worries me, but the story's not going badly. So, it deserves at least 4.5 stars, maybe just 4. But people are super biased against anything that’s not a 5. Like, they act like 4 is bad, 4.5 is just okay, and 5 is a masterpiece, but it’s not like that.

Initially the novel was friking amazing, great kingdom building, great progression, and great battle. But after the battle arc the MC was like fuck this kingdom building shit, I am just going the let the citizens do their own stuff. And unsuprisingly corruption, incompetent king, and civil war happens. Completely killing off the great progression they once had. The most thing I am sad about is way do this? Why abandon the kingdom you had build? Why destroy the prestiges of the kingdom that we are so font of had come such a long way?

P.S. Of the later in the chapter the MC did come back and 'rebuild' the kingdom to become more advance and so. But damn it, is it necessary to have the 'father getting the milk' arc in the middle 😭