While I have no bad things to say about the story, I can't for the life of me say this novel has good writing, and that's for one reason. Subtext. There is not a single hint of subtext throughout the entire thing, the author treats every reader like they're an absolute idiot who can't understand that sometimes things are implicit not explicit. Now, that's not to say a lot of people reading webnovels aren't idiots, but I'd like to be treated like I have basic reading comprehension sometimes.

Edit: Seems my review was disliked a bunch of times by the same exact guy, phat tan. While you should always take every review you see with a grain of salt, please don't take the large amount of dislikes I've gotten as indication that I was trolling.