It'd be better if the mc was more manipulative like Austin(The conqueror's path).The story pacing is weird.Like the incest part was quite forced by the author.Most FMC are used things.I think most of them should be virgin and have a bit possessive yandere traits.The s#x scenes are quite detailed like we can guess the author is not quite experienced with women.(Well,he's Chinese). Overall it is a good story.

It was my first novel so,in past,It was very enjoyable and fun for me to read it.But the writing quality dropped day by day.At first the paragraph texts were detailed.But it feels very fast paced now.The backstories are good but the side characters Pov are not well written and not easy to connect with them.The love stories are good but not the best.Although not like author's other work 'Dual cultivator' but the heroines should be more possessive and yandere type.The female characters shown at the very beginning,I quite liked them but hope that the author would make them reappear later in the story.Sometimes the MC gets very dense.Like he should at least be a bit possessive of the heroines.After reading the novel 'The conqueror's path',my perspective of romance changed a bit.The time requirement for power leveling are getting too much.Also the mc is too much overpowered.He has that demishes 99% of his progress.That's too much and cliche.He also has some personality issues.Like he has millions of years cultivation experience but still acts naive.He should be more ruthless and cunning.There are also many more secrets that are yet to be shown.Author should have taken his time in the story.None of the past live of MC are well explained.If the author can keep up with the current pace and not get bored then I am sure this wholesome novel would at least have 6000-8000 chapters.Overall I am very excited and have high hopes for it.