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This review is not final due to the lack of chapters and depth that the story has gotten into. However, from what I have read, the plot is relatively light with there only being minor setbacks at most it was him getting beaten by his siblings. The story so far has been ok. The mc is ok and doesn't really take anything to heart (however is quite the overthinker). There is a nice mix of humor between chapters. Overall so far is a nice light read.
Sorry, I just can't really stand simp mcs...
The plot is mid and very light with the minor possibility for character development later on. However, I read 50~ chapters and the main character is mid and nothing unique with a very simple virgin way of thinking. All in all if you just want smut with basically no plot and your ok with an mc that thinks primarily with their second brain/third leg then I wish you luck.
From what I've read this web novel is doing quite well, plot, characters, development-wise and world building. It has an interesting way of writing using interviews midway through the story that, depending on the person, could increase the enjoyment or decrease the immersion or both. This is unfortunately not my taste in a web novel, it has many nice features but overall is quite bland and predictable. My advice is to try reading the first 10 chapters, if you like it nice you can read some more, if not then nice you didn't waste your time with a book you don't like.
Cliché and simple, nothing groundbreaking but it does a good job at the fundamentals. Overall, a good read that somehow hooked me into reading the whole thing in 2 days. There are some issues with POV switching and the power system for some. However, for more experienced readers this is definitely no issue.
(I've read way too many mtls so this is second nature)
Worldbuilding 8/10 (good worldbuilding)
Pacing 8/10 (nice and consistent pacing)
Plot 7/10 (quite simple but effective)
Characters 5/10 (other than the mc, the rest are not focused on and they don't show the backstory of most of the supporting characters and harem)
Concept 7/10 (the concept regarding norse and greek mythology is nice along with using the weapon names provides a nice little twist from the average transmigration wn)
Power System 8/10 (In general the power system is easy, 12 zodiacs that represent the strongest + his dad and some hidden villains, the pros such as Eden then knights which are decided on skill and aura)
This just seems like a self-fulfilment novel, not my cup of tea. The story starts with an op character that already has everything. Wives? Taken. Concubines? Too many to count. I have no problems with OP characters in the beginning, but the starting point makes it seem as if we're missing a large amount from the story beginning, mid, late and even endgame phases. The story leaves a miniscule amount for any possible development, most likely solely from the new characters, probably the disciples. Also, there are lots of niches like how the disciples fall for the mc, etc. Overall if you just want a no plot, time wasting, pretty girl collector, OP character story then be my guest.
Worldbuilding 4/10 (not much worldbuilding, focusing on the mc and his disciples)
Pacing 7/10 (the pacing is the one redeeming factor so far)
Plot 4/10 (self-fulfillment with a bunch of girls… the overall cycle is: beautiful girl -> disciple -> gives God items, helps her or pampers her (or all) -> disciple falls in love with mc -> welcomed into the harem -> next girl repeat)
Characters 4/10 (cantered around mc and the current disciple)
Concept 4/10 (cliché nothing unique, been done before)
Power System 4/10 (doesn’t matter too much cause it’s just there to show his power)
It's a while since I've written my last review, but this story deserves one. This review is a placeholder for now but on Chapter 112 and it's a nice story. If you have time I urge you to give it a go.
At least for me it's worth your time.
If I were to summarize this entire novel in a few words, it would be:
Sugar, pure sugar
This story is a pure love story that focuses on the development of feelings that the characters have, from hate to affection. This type of story is simple and generic, however it caters towards my personal interests. The characters are nice, the story is fine and the pacing is done well. The simplicity is also a nice factor in a genre that could've led to deep tragic misunderstandings and trauma, complexifying the plot. A simple story from time to time is a nice break from the usual.
Overall it's a simple, nice read. Personally, I think it's worth some time.
Personal Opinion: 8/10
More Generalized Opinion: 6/10
Precaution: Chapter 71, 72, 93 and 94 are NSFW
Thank you for taking the time to read my review and I hope you enjoy this story.
To begin this Light novel, The MC is reborn into a completely free-s*x like society, in which women are degraded into essentially objects used for reproduction to earn an income and all other men except for our MC have difficulty getting hard(exaggeration but you get my point).
The difference in this LN is that the entire society is basically the phrase "flat is justice" with women that have big assets (big breasts and a*s) are considered ugly. Making it perfect for our MC who prefers woman with assets.
I personally dislike it due to the excess amount of unique (imo disgusting) number of different preferences within this story. E.g. Incest, but not only your stereotypical Mother and sister, no your d*mn grandma too (and not one occasion, multiple), this being only one example.
However, after saying from a more unbiased and experience POV. I really think this novel surpasses and lands itself as one of the best when it comes to the quality of smut(at least in the beginning 300ish chapters, I am unfortunately not willing to read more then that) in this particular genre. (P.S. I have heard feedback from others saying it gets quite bland and boring later on)
I would recommend it to others who are more experienced/into this genre all the time, and will warn people who aren't used to or dislike incest or people who dislike unusual sexual preferences. You will most likely find it creepy or conflicting.
Overall,
For more experienced people: 4.5-5/5 (at least for the beginning)
For people who dislike unusual preferences: 2-3/5
The main thing that holds the scores are the quality of the smut scenes alone.
This WN is a really well done and fantastic time loop story that really places focuses on character development and an organic development of the plot.
The stories world building and power system are unique and well thought out and has consistency and good interaction with the plot of the story. It explored most options and left no loose ends, so while you might feel sad reading it at times, the end result will leave you feeling satisfied.
Important/Main points about the novel:
1. The mc is absolutely insane (in a good way, it makes the comedy perfect) however, as the novel progress the mc becomes more sane.
2. It's centered on the MC's power and its consequences
3. Comedy is absolute peak (absolute cinema like deadpool)
4. The romance is not the main theme/ is closer to a sub plot
5. Not dragged out to like 1000s of chapters, simply 130 chapters of pure peak
Overall, the novel is peak, one of the best, definitely give it a shot.(perhaps slightly overrated in some different LN or WN sites but still definitely one of the greats)
P.S. Currently my Favorite at the time of me making this review, so it may contain bias.