Story consept and characters are great, but after 3100 chapter writer fu**ed the noval so bad, I had to quit. Everything was well and good but writing quality sucks after C 3100. Last point I want to make is the mc is op i know but after every evolution he leaves all he learnt for ex- in 3rd S he learnt control of elements but never used them later, 4th S he gets some egg and other stuf but later leave those bla bla he just learns some stuf then never uses those later.

Currently reading Chapter 140, i thaught something... It would be great if someone mixe this noval with "village head's debauchery" ... This mc has great tools and world concept is great but mc is laim, in VHD MC carecter and writing quality is great ... I just need mix ... primitive people so not a lot of technology, Free world(primitive world so not sexually devloped and not much food so interested is low and not interested), lot of Milf, drop MC, no harem (mc just doses his thing without bilding a massive harem), etc .... And phone thing is no good, During fight it might get stolen or something. Also mix few free world concept

I tried very hard to read but the writing style fills horrible, like a robot.... Story and the consept are good, I like it very much but more I read more it fills like I am forcing myself to do so.

Good story and concept 👍 although it is bit boring for me but anyone who are looking for a slow read would love the concept... It contain mistery, exploration, fantasy... Al in all I like it ... If mc is bit better that would be great 

Good noval , i like it a lot but mc is bit dence... And sisters should be pampered. Minor changes in terms of mcs carecter would make the noval very very good and ending looks bit rushed. 

This noval is good if you are reading this trope for the first time but there are many similar noval i read that has similar story, there are no problem with the noval and mc is also good. 

I like the story's start but Writing style is very boring so story Start was great up to C-150 so writing was tolerable but later story become monotonous just fighting this and that so with writing quality it become very boring ... And mcs power is very spread... Instead of gaining power from this and that power should be strim line... Like marshal art should evolv physique and demon part should give special powers ... And mc turned into a towering gient is not that good i think 

I like the story and everything is great in this noval exept writing... Start was great, writing style felte like normal for a ghost story type noval... But middle parts writing felte like someone writing a elaborate poem, then at the end it feels like some hip hop drama... Please fix the writing style and I can bet the noval will be a hot sell

I like the story, but writing is very chaotic... I like the fun and not always running from danger story... This part is only my request but if if the author sees this and free than in future you may consider a story "in a world like lord of mistery, where ghost(resentful/vengeful spirit) and spirit object are abundant and pose threats to human out mc is a spirit object dall (same as this story and hopefully male) join the buro and help investigate and deal with thos spirit"... This is just a thought I came up with which sims intresting but if u take action please let me know.

Great concept and well executed but not for me, i leave the detailed review for who finishes the story. [For me i just like a mc full of cheat and fully buff and indipendent... I am reading Novels for frictional satisfaction so why make the MC realistic.]