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Chapter 393: Chapter 392: Wanting to Fly into the Sky, Side by Side with the Sun Chapter 393: Chapter 392: Wanting to Fly into the Sky, Side by Side with the Sun “Speak up,” Wang Hao crossed his legs and said, “Do you want to hear the truth or lies?”

“Of course the truth,” Jiang Ruoyun hurriedly said, “Teacher Little Wang Hao, go ahead, I love hearing the truth!”

“The truth is,” Wang Hao’s head wagged like a bobblehead, “it’s simply unwatchable…”

“You!” Hearing her work being dismissed as worthless, Jiang Ruoyun immediately became anxious, “Why is my script not good?”

“That’s right!” Cao Hua was also angered, “Teacher, why are you so mean? Do you think you are Teacher Big Wang Hao? Where is our skit not good?!”

The other three nodded in agreement, “Exactly, how is it not good?!” “It has so many laughable moments, I guarantee Brother Hao would praise us!” “That’s for sure, this script took Cao Hua an entire morning to come up with!”

You just slapped your forehead and came up with this thing, didn’t you?

“You don’t agree, huh?” Wang Hao hummed, “Then let me tell you!” As he spoke, Wang Hao went straight into rant mode, “Your opening starts with singing, what kind of song is that?! Brother Hao! Brother Hao! You’re really something! A web series made you a god, and out pops Brother Ritian! Do you guys think Brother Hao is Sun Wukong who burst out of a rock?! These lyrics must change, they must!”

“Our proudest part is these lyrics!” Hearing that the lyrics needed changing, Cao Hua nearly jumped up, “These lyrics are classic! Teacher Big Wang Hao would definitely be happy hearing them! The key point is, it’s because of these lyrics we plan to motivate entrepreneurship in the skit!”

Bro, I’m not happy at all, okay?!

“I say it needs changing, then it must be changed!” Wang Hao angrily declared, “An inspirational skit with sycophantic lyrics, are you trying to motivate or just suck up and climb the ladder?!”

“Eh? You make a good point,” Cao Hua paused for a moment upon hearing this, “That said, if Teacher Big Wang Hao hears these lyrics someday, he’ll definitely think we’re just trying to latch onto his coattails. So, teacher, how should we change it?”

Jiang Ruoyun also nodded and said, “That’s the case, then what do we do?”

Wang Hao immediately began to spin his tale, “If you want to inspire, you have to believe in yourself! You should want to fly into the sky, shoulder to shoulder with the sun, right?”

“Want to fly into the sky, shoulder to shoulder with the sun?” The four exchanged glances, their eyes lighting up, “Right! That’s the attitude of believing in ourselves! We’ve got to soar into the sky, shoulder to shoulder with the sun!”

Wang Hao: “…”

You four don’t need to fly, your faces are already as big as the sun!

“Next, for the opening act, you need to clearly state your current status,” Wang Hao easily rattled off, “Like, you, your girlfriend wants to break up with you, you, your job isn’t going well, you, entered a talent show, out of five thousand participants you ranked four thousand nine!”

The group was instantly puzzled by Wang Hao’s words, “Right, right, right, makes sense, but then what?”

“But even though you’re in a dismal state, you’re always filled with hope, wanting to be shoulder to shoulder with the sun,” Wang Hao elaborated, “So you can’t just ask girls for money whenever you’re broke! Holding dreams and struggling in startups, that’s a good motivational act. If you just ask girls for money when you’re broke, it’s not inspirational; your values are all wrong!”

The group were drenched in cold sweat from Wang Hao’s scolding, wanting to object but unable to find the words!

And clearly, Wang Hao was just getting started, “So your skit, don’t even mention if Brother Hao will like it, whether it can even pass the review to let Brother Hao see, is itself an unknown! It needs change! Must change! Big changes! Start from scratch! If not, with your skit as it is, it’s definitely minutes away from getting axed!”

Damn, is it that serious?

After hearing Wang Hao’s words, everyone was dumbfounded, Cao Hua was sweating profusely, saying, “Then teacher, please take a look, how should we change it?”

“Actually, it’s simple,” Wang Hao began to explain to them. “First of all, any skit must have conflict. Hey, you guys know what conflict is, right?”

“Know,” Cao Hua quickly responded, “It’s when two people are not in sync and have opposing views, right?”

“Correct,” Wang Hao nodded in satisfaction, “Being out of sync, having an opposing or inconsistent opinion, that’s conflict. You guys must remember, any work without conflict isn’t a good work, it would feel flat without any ups and downs, get it?”

The group nodded together like pecking chickens, “Got it!”

“So we need to create a conflict,” Wang Hao said, “For instance, you are singing in this, trying to motivate, feeling excited, and loud, what conflict might arise?”

“What conflict might arise…” Cao Hua thought hard for a moment before his eyes suddenly lit up, “Disturbing the peace!”

“Exactly!” Wang Hao looked immensely teachable, “That’s the conflict point, got it? You guys singing and disturbing the peace, what kind of reaction would the landlord have?”

“The landlord would get very angry and come knocking?” This time Cao Hua was somewhat inspired, “So we have a conflict with the landlord?!”

“That’s right!” Wang Hao cheerfully said, “You see, that creates a conflict, and then all kinds of interesting things can stem from that conflict. Like maybe the landlord is a very mean-spirited old lady who finds fault with you guys, right?”

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