I have to say this was a really nice find. The writer visibly improves over time after the initial childhood arc. It doesn't stay childish and happy go lucky there are genuinely hard to read moments and some decent emotional writing. I look forward to seeing where this goes and how far the author is willing to take it. 

And to all fellow doaists out there please take a moment to eventually learn the wonders of "Are you courting death!?" There is a young master who needs to be humbled. (Just keep reading and you won't be disappointed I promise.)

This has a lot of potential, but I think the distribution of time spent in the real world vs the game can get a bit skewed. It starts of rather simple but the complexity of the story definitely has started to take a turn for the better. It is a bit slow on the releases but it's still a quality story.