yea but the an author should move acc to their vision not the readers we have seen countless novels been ruined that way
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Shivam Singh
Can you really blame the author for that? When that 1v10 fight was being published, readers were accusing him of "dragging" the story. Had he gone into details of Juli's plan, they would've rioted.
On another note, we do see how Juli manipulate people in the Ivan's arc (the one before the newest one). It's not anything big of flashy, but we do see how she thinks and exploit others. So there's that.
i acutallly agree people are too blind to see or get mad if u point it out, about julie i agree author never show how she actually manipulate people the author just says she does we never see her plant any physoclogical clue he just points out she is smart not through her actions. I kinda hate there type of genius character without any substantial evidence and u dont need to flaunt that they r intellegent.
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Nick Dusk
Flaws of this novel (my opinion) -
1) we all know that in fight between fighters who has learned techniques (like Kung-fu)and fighters who had learned fighting on streets , the winner will obviously be fighters who had learned technique will win. And we know that mc had not learned any fighting techniques but he always manages to defeat those who had learned techniques seriously. I know experience matters but in a hand to hand or weapon to weapon combat mc should loose in my opinion because he had not learned any technique.
2)juli is shown too much overhyped or over intelligent and other characters (NPC) are shown dumb . I mean I can understand that she can manipulate 1st years ,some dumb 2nd years but how can she manipulate 3rd years (those are at least supposed to be A rank A ) .
3)There was no need to tell his whole plan to high priest like a 3rd rate cliche villain
4)The world is too much convenient for the mc , like aren't there any lie detection card or memory reading card
u just need some patience go and read it tho i recommend reading on lnw as there are many comments explaing stuff on every chap that might have u confused in the first 100 chap
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Die_hard
So guys should I wait for anime or just up read the light novel. Heard pretty interesting things about this story can't wait to read but thought would it better to wait for the anime. here after shadow slave as first LN.
how did come to this is wild to like the first 500 chap were okay
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UsReader99
If you deep read of this novel I'm gonna to say is father(leon) of MC under control of influence because latest chapters MC admit he totally brainwashing other characters like happen to his own biological parent, daughters and same new daughter(Merlin) of MC. Chapter 993, 1002, 1025, 1098, 1099, and 1134 many chapters we can read nonsense explanations, reasons, details of decisions and actions make of MC, and mostly disgusting happen latest chapters of story.
thank you for this comment. This was exactly wut was on my mind u put it really well. This address my grievance with the novel as its actually one of my first novel that got me into webnovels and as i continued to read i became more disappointed and disgusted by it and i saw some comments still defending this is wild to me.Big W to u for actually putting this into perspective.
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Sorrowful
F*ck, nobody can defend the fall of this novel. It is to be studied so that no author commits such a cime. The inc*st was never the problem, it was expected, but him eloping with his mother was the true downfall. It was built in a way that Victor always loved and respected his family, especially his father who instilled in him the 'family' trait. So to simply change it to his mother falling for him, while his father becomes a horny dog, is simply unthinkable. The author is to blade foremost. No matter what you are envisioning as an author, nobody should be able to influence you. You should never change the ending or important plot points just because readers manage to figure out, guess or hope for something else. At that point you stop being the author and become an editor to a novel where the readers are the authors.
I didnt include those but i have already read them sigh i running out of good novels and the new ones that come out are copypaste same genre i might have to dive into classic literature
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Ren_876
Hm there is no novel that come equal to them or their lore or stroy but yes bro read orv it's good
Personally I'm not a big fan of orv but it's stroy specially it's last volume is peak and also read TBATE it's also peak almost equal to them
So read orv and tbate oh yes also entrail novel it's not equal to them but atleast take the top 10 spot
yea but the an author should move acc to their vision not the readers we have seen countless novels been ruined that way
Can you really blame the author for that? When that 1v10 fight was being published, readers were accusing him of "dragging" the story. Had he gone into details of Juli's plan, they would've rioted.
On another note, we do see how Juli manipulate people in the Ivan's arc (the one before the newest one). It's not anything big of flashy, but we do see how she thinks and exploit others. So there's that.
just read cultivation novel easily reaching 1000000000 chap
I read the longer ones, so despite having read only so many, i should be around 50000-80000 novel chapters.
only 80 plus bruh wut have u been doing. during the starting days i used to read everything i could get me hands one u need to start grinding
I haven't reached that phase despite reading 80+ novels for 5+ years. Hopefully I don't reach that soon😭
just like the past me fr now i barely read because i been tired of the same copypaste genre novel that have been coming out i just play games now😭
... IhaveTooMuchTime has truly become my alias by this point. Must grind novels, while grinding whatever braincells are left to dust.
i acutallly agree people are too blind to see or get mad if u point it out, about julie i agree author never show how she actually manipulate people the author just says she does we never see her plant any physoclogical clue he just points out she is smart not through her actions. I kinda hate there type of genius character without any substantial evidence and u dont need to flaunt that they r intellegent.
Flaws of this novel (my opinion) -
1) we all know that in fight between fighters who has learned techniques (like Kung-fu)and fighters who had learned fighting on streets , the winner will obviously be fighters who had learned technique will win. And we know that mc had not learned any fighting techniques but he always manages to defeat those who had learned techniques seriously. I know experience matters but in a hand to hand or weapon to weapon combat mc should loose in my opinion because he had not learned any technique.
2)juli is shown too much overhyped or over intelligent and other characters (NPC) are shown dumb . I mean I can understand that she can manipulate 1st years ,some dumb 2nd years but how can she manipulate 3rd years (those are at least supposed to be A rank A ) .
3)There was no need to tell his whole plan to high priest like a 3rd rate cliche villain
4)The world is too much convenient for the mc , like aren't there any lie detection card or memory reading card
u just need some patience go and read it tho i recommend reading on lnw as there are many comments explaing stuff on every chap that might have u confused in the first 100 chap
So guys should I wait for anime or just up read the light novel. Heard pretty interesting things about this story can't wait to read but thought would it better to wait for the anime. here after shadow slave as first LN.
how did come to this is wild to like the first 500 chap were okay
If you deep read of this novel I'm gonna to say is father(leon) of MC under control of influence because latest chapters MC admit he totally brainwashing other characters like happen to his own biological parent, daughters and same new daughter(Merlin) of MC. Chapter 993, 1002, 1025, 1098, 1099, and 1134 many chapters we can read nonsense explanations, reasons, details of decisions and actions make of MC, and mostly disgusting happen latest chapters of story.
thank you for this comment. This was exactly wut was on my mind u put it really well. This address my grievance with the novel as its actually one of my first novel that got me into webnovels and as i continued to read i became more disappointed and disgusted by it and i saw some comments still defending this is wild to me.Big W to u for actually putting this into perspective.
F*ck, nobody can defend the fall of this novel. It is to be studied so that no author commits such a cime. The inc*st was never the problem, it was expected, but him eloping with his mother was the true downfall. It was built in a way that Victor always loved and respected his family, especially his father who instilled in him the 'family' trait. So to simply change it to his mother falling for him, while his father becomes a horny dog, is simply unthinkable. The author is to blade foremost. No matter what you are envisioning as an author, nobody should be able to influence you. You should never change the ending or important plot points just because readers manage to figure out, guess or hope for something else. At that point you stop being the author and become an editor to a novel where the readers are the authors.
very close
d*mn, let me guess, is there a door god or something? lol
I didnt include those but i have already read them sigh i running out of good novels and the new ones that come out are copypaste same genre i might have to dive into classic literature
Hm there is no novel that come equal to them or their lore or stroy but yes bro read orv it's good
Personally I'm not a big fan of orv but it's stroy specially it's last volume is peak and also read TBATE it's also peak almost equal to them
So read orv and tbate oh yes also entrail novel it's not equal to them but atleast take the top 10 spot