The writings simple and bland which lacks creativity in painting good discriptive world building eg. Fighting scene was too rushed and emotionless not creating enough tension to draw in the audience
MC seems one dimensional, a cliche nice guy with no personality nor motivation except doing what's right by societal standards.
Story seems dull and hate to say it GENERIC!! But this is only the first chapter and generic plots can still leave potential for a good story
We'll stick around for a bit to confirm if the hype is worth it ππ½
guys does sunny also use his incarnations when they Uhmm do that.
cause that would be pretty interesting to know for research ofc. But yea ngl nephis is way too open to being freaky with him. I genuinely get why he feels her feelings are shallow
I love Cassie and all but I can't help but always feel like she's acting suspicious most of the time, like she's about to pull something diabolical. Which isn't that surprising considering that 2 of the most powerful saints in the world sunny and mordret are most of weary is Cassie π
I burrowed through the last 80 chapters finally gonna take a break and prepare myself for the 'peak'
You ain't missed anything, Atp we just gotta bare with it until chapter 80 cs the plots out the door π
Can somebody tell me when did he have his tattoo I must've skipped something because I NEVER HEARD about it??
Hey guys π so the thing is I'm f*king lost,π can anyone fill me in on who Sol is? And where did the tattoo f*king come from? π
Okay shadow slave fine but authors pov too come on π might as well add in a pregnant abominations while we're at it
Not the best start to a novel;
The writings simple and bland which lacks creativity in painting good discriptive world building eg. Fighting scene was too rushed and emotionless not creating enough tension to draw in the audience
MC seems one dimensional, a cliche nice guy with no personality nor motivation except doing what's right by societal standards.
Story seems dull and hate to say it GENERIC!! But this is only the first chapter and generic plots can still leave potential for a good story
We'll stick around for a bit to confirm if the hype is worth it ππ½
I'm here because of all the hype this has been getting on the web, let's see if it lives up to the hype π§
Wife now, I'm pretty sure
I'm trying to remember who Kimmy is
Luster's gf right?
A fellow voyager, welcome let us rest here comrade.
hey guys its me forsaken from lightnovelcave (no one knows me)i just wanted to say rip im gonna miss all my friends from the comments
We just all thinking the same thing huh...
guys does sunny also use his incarnations when they Uhmm do that.
cause that would be pretty interesting to know for research ofc. But yea ngl nephis is way too open to being freaky with him. I genuinely get why he feels her feelings are shallow
I love Cassie and all but I can't help but always feel like she's acting suspicious most of the time, like she's about to pull something diabolical. Which isn't that surprising considering that 2 of the most powerful saints in the world sunny and mordret are most of weary is Cassie π