
Reviews
I liked it for the first 600 ish chapters, it was a good time pass but nothing special at the same time. The characters are likeable in my opinion but they dont really have any development through out the story. The world building is pretty much nonexistent but it didnt really effect the story. I ended up skimming/skipping most of it after 600 just because the plot felt dragged and I know most will probably just read for "plot" but in the beginning i was actually looking forward to the reveal about rudys powers but the author really dragged it for to long in my opinion. Speaking of the "plot" it wasnt the worst ive read in a smut novel but it definitely wasnt the best, the author loves using describing words which feels weird since he does it so much but to each their own ig.
Overall its realisticly a 3/5 maybe lower in my opinion but rating it that low will scare most people off before trying it. Its good to pass time if u have read most the good ones on the site or WNW before it got shut down.
I read about 400 chapters and I personally cannot continue it, i liked the story and most parts about it other than the harem size, grammer and writing style sometimes but if was fun to read. But i checked the authors discord cause it felt like Archer just started to lust after everyone he set eyes on and the harem ends up being insane and i personally dont like harem novels that have a buncccchhhh of people.
Now on to the main review the first 100 ish chapters are weird and Archer acts like a crazy person especially the first 60 or so chapters but it got better after that. the romance is sweet with a few heriones but its minimal and for the most part it feels forced by the authtor and one demonsional. Most of the girls just fall for the mc for no reason and dont really seem to care for him just the idea of him. the power system is bad, and i mean bad, the author didnt stick to his own system he gave in the early chapters and kind of just scales any one on one fight with the mc. for some reason he can fight in wars and battlefeilds no problem but as soon as its a one on one he always struggles just to win anyway. The author also just kind of throws numbers around of the stats for archer, for example when he is training with one of the girls she easily overpowers him even though he is already over 5x her level and more so strength stat it just makes no sense. the world building is pretty good but its also weird since there are soooo many empires and kingdoms across the continents. the plot is interesting and mostly why i kept reading for so long.
Anyways its definitely not a bad story just not my personal taste later on. the worst things are definitely the harem being too large/forced feeling, and the power system. I would still say give it a try and u might like it and the beginning gets way better once Sera gets introduced thats when it tames a little fyi.
Sorry for the yap 🧌
A favorite for a smut novel for me and probably a lot of others. The Plot is fun and engaging while the "plot" is written really well, there is a decent amount of smut in the beginning but it dies down later or when certain arcs are happening. The characters are great and the actually feel alive and have their own problems and feelings. The world building is well done and easy to picture. The first few chapters are a little slow but they still arent bad, the story really picks up a lot once he goes to the astral realm(best ark so far). I really like the power system personally, its simple and easy to understand in stead of just endlessly power scaling like some other novels. Sol as a mc is very likeable he isnt a saint but he isnt evil either, he treats his people kindly and enemies harshly. He would watch the world burn if it meant keeping the people he cares about be safe. The fights are great and I could picture everything in detail, Sols fights especially later on in the story are hype af especially in the asteral realm arc.
Overall just a really fun story that is well done. Also the Author said on his patreon the story should be ending before the end of this year.
A good novel just not what i expected. I thought it would have a bunch of duaghter father moments but not really. the plot is decent, with good characters. definitely a good time pass if u have nothing else to read or are bored of all the trash/heavy stuff. I will say i remember the ending being lackluster but to each their own.
A really good story with a good plot a great cast of characters and awsome world building. the ending was decent but not amazing somewhat lack luster but definitely not enough to turn away from this amazing novel.
My favorite novel i have ever read even out of a few hundred i have read so far. Everything is amazing be it the characters, the plot, the world building, the descriptions, the dialogue, just every factor was the best i have read. The romance is amazing between bom and Yu jitae, its slow at first but picks up later. The plot twists later actually blew my mind and the emotional moments genuinely made me cry a few times even when rereading. The only thing bad about it was not haveing side storys. I love this novel a lot and have read it at least 5 times in the last 2 years it is a masterpiece in these genres. please give it a try.
A really well written novel. the worldbuilding is good, the characters are amazing, the romance is awsome, and the plot is good too. the twists later are interesting and i didnt see them coming but just really fun and pleasnt read. i do recommend it.