
Reviews
I’m usually too lazy to write reviews, but I had to make an exception for this one. Honestly, this is the best fanfic I’ve ever read. It starts off a bit slow and rough around the edges—clearly the author was still figuring things out—but the way the story grows and improves is incredible. I’m so glad I didn’t let the early negative comments stop me from reading. If anything, they made discovering how great this turned out even more satisfying.
I’m usually too lazy to write reviews, but I can’t help myself—this is hands-down the best fanfic I’ve ever read. It’s a slow burn at first, and sure, the main character’s mastery could use some work (but everything else about him is fantastic), yet the way the author fills in and expands the Witcher lore is nothing short of brilliant. Each chapter is packed with detail that makes the world come alive, and it’s surprisingly easy to follow even if you’ve never played the games. I’m on my second read-through, and it’s still just as amazing. If you’re a Witcher fan—or even just curious about the universe—do yourself a favor and dive in. You won’t regret it!
The story actually started off pretty cool — I liked the main character’s powers, the action focus, and it was refreshing not having a forced romance shoved in. Some of the settings were really fun too. But man, the writing kinda kills it for me. There’s just so much repetition, like the author doesn’t trust readers to remember anything unless it’s told five times. It gets annoying and really slows things down.
That said, I get that the reminders are meant for people who’ve been following the story over time, especially with long gaps between updates. And yeah, the author’s doing this as a hobby with no deadlines, so it makes sense. Still, the constant hand-holding and info-dumps make the chapters feel way more bloated than they need to be. I think with a bit of tightening up and more faith in the reader, it could be way more enjoyable.
If you're into fantasy with magic, dragons, and reincarnated heroes, this story is definitely worth checking out. The world-building is rich, the characters are well-developed, and once you get into it, it's really hard to stop. I got totally hooked — like, actual withdrawal vibes when there was a long break between updates. Whether you go for the web novel or the webtoon, you’re in for a great ride. Highly recommend!
I’ve read all the chapters, even the MTL ones, and honestly, this is one of the best Naruto fanfics out there — second only to the Wind one, in my opinion. The first 50 chapters were kinda slow, and I almost dropped it a few times, but it really picks up after chapter 100. Around chapter 400, the pacing dips again with some unnecessary filler, but it doesn’t last too long.
The fights are a weak point — early ones are fine when the MC is still growing, but later battles feel off. The MC gets crazy strong, but somehow his enemies suddenly get plot armor, and it doesn’t always feel like he’s getting stronger, even if technically he is.
There are a few dropped plot points (like the 5th Kazekage and the ice dragon thing), and the ending feels rushed — not incomplete, but it definitely could’ve had more. Still, the concept around the MC aiming for Kaguya-level power (Kekkei Mōra) was really cool.
Despite its flaws, I really enjoyed the story overall. I’d give it a solid 9/10. As for the translator — yeah, they’re slow and kind of paywall-heavy, but at least they’re continuing the series. If you're into Naruto fanfics, this one’s definitely worth reading.
As a longtime Dragon Ball fan, this fanfic was a fun ride. It sticks close to the original story with some cool twists thanks to the MC’s influence, and adds a light touch of Chinese fantasy vibes early on (which fades later). The grammar and writing improve a lot as it goes. The harem stuff is there but really minor. Overall, it’s a solid, nostalgic side story with an overpowered main character. Definitely worth a read if you're a DB fan — I’d give it a strong 9.5 out of 10
This is an absolute new story for fans of Naruto and reincarnation stories. The premise alone—being reborn as Madara’s grandson—sets the stage for a powerful and engaging journeys. The story introduces original abilities like Light, Darkness, and Chaos Release, and the MC’s strength develops through consistent training, strategy. The author expands the Naruto universe with new clans, techniques, and lore, turning it into a rich alternate universe that feels fresh. While the early chapters have some pacing problems, the writing improves around chapter 40, and from there it becomes a thrilling, addictive read. But after the konoha crush arc the story isn't pieced properly gets boring and inactive, the power system and everything is so vague that u have to imagine everything by yourself and build an understanding. Not worth reading.
Its a good story. There are many issues with mcs first life, it become aexcuse to the author to add stuff for his convenience but like I said it's still a good story and the fight scenes were really good