This is an absolute new story for fans of Naruto and reincarnation stories. The premise alone—being reborn as Madara’s grandson—sets the stage for a powerful and engaging journeys. The story introduces original abilities like Light, Darkness, and Chaos Release, and the MC’s strength develops through consistent training, strategy. The author expands the Naruto universe with new clans, techniques, and lore, turning it into a rich alternate universe that feels fresh. While the early chapters have some pacing problems, the writing improves around chapter 40, and from there it becomes a thrilling, addictive read. But after the konoha crush arc the story isn't pieced properly gets boring and inactive, the power system and everything is so vague that u have to imagine everything by yourself and build an understanding. Not worth reading.
Can recommend more Naruto fanfics like wind calamity and the tenseigan one
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It's a pretty mid gooner Naruto fanfic, if you want a good high quality fic read Naruto the wind calamity, its also on this site and I enjoyed that novel as much as the original, though the starting 50 chapters are rough as it's the authors first novel, after that he really starts to show his talent, to craft some of the best fights I've read and really expand on the parts of naruto the manga never go to.
It's not harem in particular but there is little bit love intrest which just blends with the story it doesn't feel out of place or forced. You can read it even if you don't like romance
If you're into fantasy with magic, dragons, and reincarnated heroes, this story is definitely worth checking out. The world-building is rich, the characters are well-developed, and once you get into it, it's really hard to stop. I got totally hooked — like, actual withdrawal vibes when there was a long break between updates. Whether you go for the web novel or the webtoon, you’re in for a great ride. Highly recommend!
The story actually started off pretty cool — I liked the main character’s powers, the action focus, and it was refreshing not having a forced romance shoved in. Some of the settings were really fun too. But man, the writing kinda kills it for me. There’s just so much repetition, like the author doesn’t trust readers to remember anything unless it’s told five times. It gets annoying and really slows things down.
That said, I get that the reminders are meant for people who’ve been following the story over time, especially with long gaps between updates. And yeah, the author’s doing this as a hobby with no deadlines, so it makes sense. Still, the constant hand-holding and info-dumps make the chapters feel way more bloated than they need to be. I think with a bit of tightening up and more faith in the reader, it could be way more enjoyable.
Did any of you guys checked the fairy tale fanfic of the author? let me know how it is if you did
Is he actually blind or he is gonna pop some new eyes out of nowhere
try Naruto: The Blind Swordsman
i haven't finished it yet, but so far it seems pretty good, 'i live in your walls' reccomends it, good writing so far.
This is an absolute new story for fans of Naruto and reincarnation stories. The premise alone—being reborn as Madara’s grandson—sets the stage for a powerful and engaging journeys. The story introduces original abilities like Light, Darkness, and Chaos Release, and the MC’s strength develops through consistent training, strategy. The author expands the Naruto universe with new clans, techniques, and lore, turning it into a rich alternate universe that feels fresh. While the early chapters have some pacing problems, the writing improves around chapter 40, and from there it becomes a thrilling, addictive read. But after the konoha crush arc the story isn't pieced properly gets boring and inactive, the power system and everything is so vague that u have to imagine everything by yourself and build an understanding. Not worth reading.
Yo!!
Is it a good story? Does it follow canon? will mc be op ?
It''s quite interesting lots of schemes and mind games
will the Harem be to much?
Can recommend more Naruto fanfics like wind calamity and the tenseigan one
- Thank You
It's a pretty mid gooner Naruto fanfic, if you want a good high quality fic read Naruto the wind calamity, its also on this site and I enjoyed that novel as much as the original, though the starting 50 chapters are rough as it's the authors first novel, after that he really starts to show his talent, to craft some of the best fights I've read and really expand on the parts of naruto the manga never go to.
It's not harem in particular but there is little bit love intrest which just blends with the story it doesn't feel out of place or forced. You can read it even if you don't like romance
Who's the FL? And it's not harem right?
If you're into fantasy with magic, dragons, and reincarnated heroes, this story is definitely worth checking out. The world-building is rich, the characters are well-developed, and once you get into it, it's really hard to stop. I got totally hooked — like, actual withdrawal vibes when there was a long break between updates. Whether you go for the web novel or the webtoon, you’re in for a great ride. Highly recommend!
The story actually started off pretty cool — I liked the main character’s powers, the action focus, and it was refreshing not having a forced romance shoved in. Some of the settings were really fun too. But man, the writing kinda kills it for me. There’s just so much repetition, like the author doesn’t trust readers to remember anything unless it’s told five times. It gets annoying and really slows things down.
That said, I get that the reminders are meant for people who’ve been following the story over time, especially with long gaps between updates. And yeah, the author’s doing this as a hobby with no deadlines, so it makes sense. Still, the constant hand-holding and info-dumps make the chapters feel way more bloated than they need to be. I think with a bit of tightening up and more faith in the reader, it could be way more enjoyable.