I am giving such a bad review not because of the story but the absolurely horrible translation. It is pretty much unreadable.  There even seems to be mistranslted parts that make no sense at all.

This book is completed and not ongoing and should be updated. I liked reading the story and am a big fan of systems or iseki. Go ahead and read it.

The book has potential. There is a good story in there, somewhere. The translationis bad and several chapters atr missing. There is actually no ending either. Iwould skip this unless it gets updated properly. Thankfully, I only wasted a couple days onreading this.