I'm currently not sure if I want to continue reading this story, I'm losing interest.
Something is missing, maybe the complete absence of joy? I know the successes are somewhat elevating, but for me it would have made more sense if he was still under thirty y/o, not 37 already. Too many time jumps with what feels like barely any progression plus the absence of any real moments of joy or celebration and not taking care of his revenge business is making this read a bit dreadful. I give it a bit more time, but I'm currently not vibing with the story or the MC.
So the Utra nation did send people ignoring the warning? Either the secret of the royal inheritance is already out, or they are just plain stupid, or they plan to betray the other nations and make good with Noah, what's it going to be?
"There were pills able to fix any injury on the mental sphere in a matter of seconds" right, too bad it's too late for fixing up Ivor. I hope at some point he gives more credit to the guy, he was instrumental in forging his own path...
I'm currently not sure if I want to continue reading this story, I'm losing interest.
Something is missing, maybe the complete absence of joy? I know the successes are somewhat elevating, but for me it would have made more sense if he was still under thirty y/o, not 37 already. Too many time jumps with what feels like barely any progression plus the absence of any real moments of joy or celebration and not taking care of his revenge business is making this read a bit dreadful. I give it a bit more time, but I'm currently not vibing with the story or the MC.
Why not make it 5 years? Just asking...
Should we be happy that he's no going full Dr Mengele on children, but adults?
Need another break.
Oh no, he's going down the dark side of the power, human experimentation?
I think the three nations got away to easily. Such a shame
So the Utra nation did send people ignoring the warning? Either the secret of the royal inheritance is already out, or they are just plain stupid, or they plan to betray the other nations and make good with Noah, what's it going to be?
"The woman was Ruth Eeggi, the red-haired girl that Thaddeus had picked as his disciple."
Of course she's so coming out of nowhere, I hope it's not going how I expect it to go
Cool
"Noah would curse his bad luck if he was to know that his copy had appeared right in front of cultivators of the Utra nation"
Of course, who'd have thought?
"There were pills able to fix any injury on the mental sphere in a matter of seconds" right, too bad it's too late for fixing up Ivor. I hope at some point he gives more credit to the guy, he was instrumental in forging his own path...