This novel was good, but the story seemed to get away from the author at some point, so it was dropped. It had a lot of plot holes and unexplainable events, so even though the power system was interesting it couldn't maintain narritive integrity.
The characters were also a bit wooden, but they were consistent at the very least.
-2 plot holes
-2 poor supporting characters
+4 good power system
+2 character growth
+3 fleshed-out setting
5/10 It's worth reading, but it's flawed and was eventually left unfinished. Worthy of a rewrite from the top, since I believe the author noticed many of the issues and could correct them if they went back all the way.
This novel isn't perfect by any means, but the main character at the very least goes from someone coming to grips with the new magic world they've entered to an evil character done right.
it's true that the plot has holes in it, the story threads get snipped off at the end, and the setting in the final arc of the novel is a copy of The Forgotten Realms of DND, but it IS worth reading if you like villains.
+8 for really good (evil) character growth
-2 for plot holes
-2 for rushed ending
+2 for the creative and innovative use of the magic power system
LightNovelPub too? Yeah, this website isn't quite as good as that used to be, but it's alright. They basically copied everything LNP did, minus the developer interaction, with a far less prevalent reader community, and worse novels overall, but it's good enough.
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you know what my old website got deleted, I furious that I can find nice website to read this again but luckily meet this websites. Tq for update 😘
Wow. And I mean, Wow. I've never read about such a stereotypical Gary-Stu Chinese protagonist. It checks every box, with 0 variation. His name is even 'Lin Tian', like, wtf.
1. He gets the exact powers he needs every time
2. Has an 'all-the-beauties-of-the-world-belong-to-me' attitude
3. Is an active and egregious pervert
4. Women fall for him, even when he acts like a creep
5. Faces 0 challenges, even when it looks like he does
This is the kind of story MCs of better novels read, get sucked into, then fight it out with this protagonist as 'the villain' who doesn't treat girls like crap. Now I'm worried if I read it I'll transmigrate.
This novel was good, but the story seemed to get away from the author at some point, so it was dropped. It had a lot of plot holes and unexplainable events, so even though the power system was interesting it couldn't maintain narritive integrity.
The characters were also a bit wooden, but they were consistent at the very least.
-2 plot holes
-2 poor supporting characters
+4 good power system
+2 character growth
+3 fleshed-out setting
5/10 It's worth reading, but it's flawed and was eventually left unfinished. Worthy of a rewrite from the top, since I believe the author noticed many of the issues and could correct them if they went back all the way.
Clicked on this novel purely because of the word "Ebullience". I bet more than half of you did too.
How does a cuttlefish novel have no reviews?
This novel isn't perfect by any means, but the main character at the very least goes from someone coming to grips with the new magic world they've entered to an evil character done right.
it's true that the plot has holes in it, the story threads get snipped off at the end, and the setting in the final arc of the novel is a copy of The Forgotten Realms of DND, but it IS worth reading if you like villains.
+8 for really good (evil) character growth
-2 for plot holes
-2 for rushed ending
+2 for the creative and innovative use of the magic power system
8/10
No. Completely unrelated, except for one thing. Both are great reads.
Is this related to omniscient readers point of view
LightNovelPub too? Yeah, this website isn't quite as good as that used to be, but it's alright. They basically copied everything LNP did, minus the developer interaction, with a far less prevalent reader community, and worse novels overall, but it's good enough.
you know what my old website got deleted, I furious that I can find nice website to read this again but luckily meet this websites. Tq for update 😘
By 'Tom the Cat'... do you mean Tom from Tom and Jerry? Because that's one of the worst ideas to combine with Wuxia I've ever heard of.
Chat, is it m@sturbation if you have to bodies, or is it fvcking yourself?
Wow. And I mean, Wow. I've never read about such a stereotypical Gary-Stu Chinese protagonist. It checks every box, with 0 variation. His name is even 'Lin Tian', like, wtf.
1. He gets the exact powers he needs every time
2. Has an 'all-the-beauties-of-the-world-belong-to-me' attitude
3. Is an active and egregious pervert
4. Women fall for him, even when he acts like a creep
5. Faces 0 challenges, even when it looks like he does
This is the kind of story MCs of better novels read, get sucked into, then fight it out with this protagonist as 'the villain' who doesn't treat girls like crap. Now I'm worried if I read it I'll transmigrate.
Bruh, she's 14-15. And you're mentally 43. Wtf is wrong with you. That's disgusting.