hmm I get what you mean like it went totally of course at some point (I think after the relationship reached its final point is a good mark) but it's still enjoyable imo. The competition seems a bit forced and all otherwise it's not great (can't compare it to lotm or ss) but it's not bad either, it's a decent novel for a first time author with an interesting concept and good worldbuilding. Imo author is setting up a sequel in this same world and I would love that
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But it also looses the novels namesake. It often happens when a novel overstays its welcome and gets dragged out a lot. I got kinda fed up with it around 768? I find the story now boring. Even the worldbuilding plotaists are meh and lack the oomf like a certain "this is chernobyl reveal"
Mate do you not feel the vibes ??? Mc is litteraly obsessed with his sister, read through all the chapters and the feeling doesn't disappear but there's no incest
I don't know, it feels so rushed, like things are happening and I can't even register them before they continue with the story. s*it got down in like 10 chapters multiple important people died. I feel like with the events that happened by 172 You could've written a good 500 chapters that goes a bit more in depth. Fights are horrible imo but it's every new authors cursw. Idk I'm a bit on the edge with this one. Romance is good tough
hmm I get what you mean like it went totally of course at some point (I think after the relationship reached its final point is a good mark) but it's still enjoyable imo. The competition seems a bit forced and all otherwise it's not great (can't compare it to lotm or ss) but it's not bad either, it's a decent novel for a first time author with an interesting concept and good worldbuilding. Imo author is setting up a sequel in this same world and I would love that
But it also looses the novels namesake. It often happens when a novel overstays its welcome and gets dragged out a lot. I got kinda fed up with it around 768? I find the story now boring. Even the worldbuilding plotaists are meh and lack the oomf like a certain "this is chernobyl reveal"
Horrible start for first 400 chapters (not story wise) but after that the writing and grammar mistakes are fixed and the story becomes very enjoyable
this plot point makes no sense sorry
Yooo finally Im so proud of them
Why the f*ck use a pill they're not life threatening injuries the hell man
"If I have to die I'll make sure to die with you guys" That's a good way to make friends
Sounds more like a threat than anything else
Yeah the author is def trying to go in that direction but idk the way he writes seems so lovey dovey it feels weird ngl
I just see it as a strong sibling bond sinve they were close together as children. But that could just be me🤷♂️
don't read if you don't wish for spoilers
Even by the end of the current chapters his powers are mostly hidden, he still holds back
But kind of everyone agrees that he is incredibly powerful. The only one who truly knows how strong he is Ig is Irina
Literally i hope by the end of the volume he stops holding back
Mate do you not feel the vibes ??? Mc is litteraly obsessed with his sister, read through all the chapters and the feeling doesn't disappear but there's no incest
Mate what?😭
I don't know, it feels so rushed, like things are happening and I can't even register them before they continue with the story. s*it got down in like 10 chapters multiple important people died. I feel like with the events that happened by 172 You could've written a good 500 chapters that goes a bit more in depth. Fights are horrible imo but it's every new authors cursw. Idk I'm a bit on the edge with this one. Romance is good tough