F*************CK, I read the first line and I have to f*cking write this sh*t down. Man, you said it yourself, you know her for a couple HOURS. WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU ARE COMPATIBLE. F*cking hell, I feel like a dumbass. F*CK. SH*T. I will continue reading, hoping it gets better, but man, regardless if it does or not, this sh*t will take away some points. This is probably the quickest I've seen a man fold under 0 pressure and tell a girl to become his lover. Like whaaaaaaaaaaaat. I am a certified hater now. Until author proves me otherwise.
Thank god he just kissed her forehead. If he kissed her lips, I would really just quit this novel. Like you haven't known her for more than a day. Also him admitting the he wishes for them to be something more feels bittersweet. You just met her, sure she is beautiful, but still. Currently, This novel feels subpar, hopefully it gets better. I had heard from the author himself that the beginning is rough. So I'm willing to tank a couple chapters.
too much yapping, go to bed ya brat, you are exhausted.
hmmm... rough.
I still dislike the present tense being used in everything. It feels wrong.
Author, you better fix these mistakes of yours, or I'm leaving a bad review😾
F*************CK, I read the first line and I have to f*cking write this sh*t down. Man, you said it yourself, you know her for a couple HOURS. WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU ARE COMPATIBLE. F*cking hell, I feel like a dumbass. F*CK. SH*T. I will continue reading, hoping it gets better, but man, regardless if it does or not, this sh*t will take away some points. This is probably the quickest I've seen a man fold under 0 pressure and tell a girl to become his lover. Like whaaaaaaaaaaaat. I am a certified hater now. Until author proves me otherwise.
Thank god he just kissed her forehead. If he kissed her lips, I would really just quit this novel. Like you haven't known her for more than a day. Also him admitting the he wishes for them to be something more feels bittersweet. You just met her, sure she is beautiful, but still. Currently, This novel feels subpar, hopefully it gets better. I had heard from the author himself that the beginning is rough. So I'm willing to tank a couple chapters.
Too much sugar for me. Not my thing.
Bona fide warrior newbie.
Lv.1 Warrior, when will he become Lv.100 Mafia boss? I am patiently waiting.
Let's see how sloppy his fightning skills are. Man has only swung a cutting knife in the past😂