First finished web novel. And I gotta say this is not the best and probably won't be near the best as I continue my journey into more web novels, but it will forever change me and my perception of other web novels. It does this because (purely my opinion) the start of the novel was slightly painful to read(chapters 1~10ish) only because it seemed to have a lack of description for characters and surroundings but as the story progresses the descriptions seem to get way better (well anything is better than nothing ig). So don't give up until you atleast get to around black lotus because thats when this story peaks.

 Side note: The misunderstandings and some comments I've seen are possibly the funniest things I've seen.

Finished date: 03/25/2025

(Date is off due to diff site)

This is possibly one of the only series that made me almost fail physics and chemistry (had a test the night b4) because of how good it was, I just couldn't stop reading. This is coming from a guy who hates reading but found my way here reading something and I can't stop. I really mean that btw because as soon as I finished I started rereading. The intro to the story and it's first arcs are peak and gets better and better (imo). I really enjoyed the first read and am enjoying the second read even more. Anyways, I wish thou a pleasant journey throughout there own dream realm.

(This is like chapters 0-2100)

Edit: By the time I finish my next 2-3 novels I'll come back to this and comment on every chapter from 1-latest. Since I've practically forgot most things By now.

This story was just beautiful. The beginning was a bit rough I will not lie, but that's because I wasn't used to the advanced words shown. Once you actually start to get used to these words it gets WAY better. The lore drops at the perfect time, The Fool, the side characters, the back story, history, just everything felt to perfect. I actually felt like I was in the book and experiencing the history. The novel just feels to perfect to be true and the different arcs are just blended beautifully.

10/10 would love to recommend this as atleast a third story. Can't get the new gens to start off with this level of peak. (Yes I'm new gen)

At first I thought this would be like any mid story just because of the name but because of its rank in some websites I gave it a chance. I'm thankful I gave it that chance 2 because this story has amazing parts and some not so amazing parts. The amazing parts tho are indeed great (Irina x Astron, Ethan interactions, Astron observations) Also I feel like the romance between Maya,Sylvie,Irina and Astron is actually well written compared to a lot of other stories I've read. (4/5 for now)

Also I see a lot of ppl hating on this and I don't understand why. I mean I get it's not amazing and the training arc is way to long. But besides that it's fairly well written also the romance is on of the best I've read in an action story so far.

This story is very well written for what I expected with a title like this. I was honestly shocked by how well they portray the friendships, struggles and the action. It felt very well put together and the pacing is basically perfect for this story. The only critiques I have is the action just feels bland and that this is a romance story but the main characters are 10. I understand that the romance will probably be later on when they become 13-18 probably. Besides this I feel really bad for Finch. Bro is just trying to make bank.

This review is from chapter 1-362. I will probably update this in a month or so because its like 11-12 chapters a week.

This story starts off amazingly although the weird habits the main character starts out with seem strange but it becomes a key point in a sense. Not quite sure on the exact chapters but somewhere in the 900-1000 range is some HEAVY hitter chapters for emotions. Ignoring the common flaws stories like this have in common it's a insanely good story that I'm sure you won't regret and will possibly be rereading later. 

Clarification: No I'm not saying this is as good as Shadow Slave and LoTM but it still deserves 5 stars.

Flaws: The romance shows up too late for me personally, The ending felt a bit rushed but it was still good, and the whole her being insanely op for her lvl (still is great tho)