Author has never interacted with a female in his life, for the love of god, don't write about women like that. Or men, or other genders. It's disgusting. 

I've only read the beginning of the first chapter, what a way to start a novel. Ranting about being a virgin and how MC can't get a girlfriend. Very bad start in my opinion. 

I absolutely love the novel. It's so fun reading about the magic and the system, and I wonder what new magic types are coming. I also adore Atticus and his love for eggs. 

I haven't read past chapter one but it's so wrong on so many levels already. MC's sister who is a child is doing child labor. She's also his bride. That's incest, pedophilia and child labor in the first ten sentences.