Story had good promise but the translation is what makes it a difficult read..

If it's ever translated it's a good story

The characters are from what I have seen well written

Currently at chap 71.. story is bit different,well written.

I would recommend this a side read.. had a lot of potential, with the character(mc) not tooo dependent on the system

The story is decently written. But the translation/author has not updated in over a year, leading to a sour taste of what would have happened

The story had

Decent world building

Decent story formatting

Good plot

Great friendship and family bond

A very minimal but well utilised system

Congratulations: incomplete