Ive just read past the 100 chapter and so far I really like the story. I enjoy reading about dark and gory stuff and following the story of a death mage is very exciting.

However there are several issues ive noticed on alot of chapters which ruins the immersion. The author has problem remembering the names of the characters that are present. They can change name from one chapter too another and hes using the wrong pronoun constantly, saying her when damon is speaking or he when a female companion speaks to damon. Ive had to reread several sections to understand whats really going on.

But if you can ignore that the story is really good and I would recommend this to anyone who likes to read about a poor child doomed to die but fate has different plans in mind

Fyi there is spelling errors in every single sentence in chapter 166 pretty anoying.

Ive read 13 chapters now and im gonna give up now. So far the author is terrible in describing everything. I have no idea how anything looks neither places nor people, it just feels very poorly written and the amount of speeling errors drives me crazy.

This one just feels lackning in pretty much all aspects. Im having a hard time understanding whats going on pretty much all the time. The author jumps from person and places in a very weird way.