Your characters are engaging and fo pull you into the story. I love that you have a strong female character that can stand proud & capable beside the male character.

Bravo. I am eager to continue reading so as to discover where you will take me. I do have some suggestions. May I suggest that you maintain the correct English gender pronoun usage so as not to confuse your reader whether you are talking about a male character as opposed to a female character. This can be confusing to a translator as gender specific pronouns may not exist in the original text 😎