🤝 Friends Forever...

Yeah... No one loves me... :(

I'm healing...

I feel like this wholesomeness will cure my mind from all the stuff I've read recently :)

How is this?

[[Rewriting my comment here so that I can continue the edits in a straight line.]]

Diving in.. I'll be updating this comment sharing my *personal* thoughts.

Edit 1: (Read 3 chapters) Seems decent to me. Neither too grand nor too bad...  I've read novels with exact same theme so hoping this would be unique as the story goes on. 

Edit 2: (7 chapters) Would have personally prefered if what the system said was enclosed in [...] instead of '...' .But whatever 🤷‍♂️ Anyways I'm glad that mc is not totally dumb.

Edit 3: (14 chapters) bro was killed by an assasin-->  Bro killed the assasin--> Another assasin came to take revenge--> Bro killed the another assasin --> Now anither assasin comes for him... d*mn.. Peak writing right here🫂 Well it isn't stretched at all so it doesn't seem thst bad as my comment portrays it to be.. Like it happened in just 14 chapters 🤷‍♂️

Edit 4: (33 ch) Why tf does it seem like bro is gonna turn into a full time farmer-

fck fck fckk... He has only 1 general card thingy.. no no noooo- Is is gonna have to choose between is mom and dad-

  ok.

🥺😭  So we not friends now? 😭 

Y-You.. I thought we were friends 🥺🥺