Why the hell am I reading this? I'd rather stick with the Chinese protagonists. They're annoying because of their harem and they're very racist, but they're much more bearable than this indecisive guy and that underestimates monsters and secondary characters so much, if you are going to kill be decisive and do not leave a single opportunity, be forceful for the love of God and if you have skills, use them!!!!!!
.....idiot, and d*mn wave of superficial authors, I'm sick of such d*mn bad characters, not evil in evil, bad in shitty writing, I really want to put the AI label on it
TI have too many problems with beginnings like this. I mean, a shitty boss who can sue him for physical assault and also professional denigration and pay off his drunken father? Is he that filial? There is something called denying inheritance and that is why the debt that may be incurred, it is not something automatic or legal that children inherit the debts of their parents, so a stupid and pointless start
I did a poison test, and I read as far as I could, as I said in the first comment, it is too descriptive with the characters' expressions and it stands out too much for me.
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Then how do you know whats in it??? Or did you just poison test?
Okay, anyone reading this better prepare for a newbie's writing, not that it's bad, but it has a lot of unnecessary over-descriptions (I think) and A lot of use of the word "smile" "smile" "laughed", etc., etc. If you don't mind that and some inconsistencies with the personalities of the protagonists, it's a very normal novel.
In moments like that I really do not know who is more stupid, the guy, or the collector himself, the guy for getting involved in shady things (I can understand if it is something VERY important) or the loan shark that corners a person to desperation, I do not know if he knows that a desperate person just needs a gun and is ready to finish or to finish you, I do not think there have not been one or two loan sharks who have died for “fun” by charging people.
Why the hell am I reading this? I'd rather stick with the Chinese protagonists. They're annoying because of their harem and they're very racist, but they're much more bearable than this indecisive guy and that underestimates monsters and secondary characters so much, if you are going to kill be decisive and do not leave a single opportunity, be forceful for the love of God and if you have skills, use them!!!!!!
SI'm just saying, you've already committed genocide against an entire race
what's the point of becoming a murderous madman with these people who despise you?
It's better to kill them all.
It is really in moments like this that one appreciates the protagonist, from the novel's omniscient point of view.
.....idiot, and d*mn wave of superficial authors, I'm sick of such d*mn bad characters, not evil in evil, bad in shitty writing, I really want to put the AI label on it
TI have too many problems with beginnings like this. I mean, a shitty boss who can sue him for physical assault and also professional denigration and pay off his drunken father? Is he that filial? There is something called denying inheritance and that is why the debt that may be incurred, it is not something automatic or legal that children inherit the debts of their parents, so a stupid and pointless start
I did a poison test, and I read as far as I could, as I said in the first comment, it is too descriptive with the characters' expressions and it stands out too much for me.
Then how do you know whats in it??? Or did you just poison test?
I don't read it
So decent or no?
Okay, anyone reading this better prepare for a newbie's writing, not that it's bad, but it has a lot of unnecessary over-descriptions (I think) and A lot of use of the word "smile" "smile" "laughed", etc., etc. If you don't mind that and some inconsistencies with the personalities of the protagonists, it's a very normal novel.
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In moments like that I really do not know who is more stupid, the guy, or the collector himself, the guy for getting involved in shady things (I can understand if it is something VERY important) or the loan shark that corners a person to desperation, I do not know if he knows that a desperate person just needs a gun and is ready to finish or to finish you, I do not think there have not been one or two loan sharks who have died for “fun” by charging people.