Nice story,,,⁰...................................................................................................,,...........................______________________________________________

Nice story and very much love you too baby boy and girl and girl and girl and boy is always with you and your family and your family members and all the happiness and happiness in the world and you are always in love with you and your family and family and family members and you are

Dark side of human nature

Interesting story writing

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Just want clear 140 words

,............................just for 140 words........ .........................................................................................................

Just boring too much writing in story

All we knew how plot gona work

After 128 I just drop reading

First parts all very exciting but somewhere after 70-75 same others novel

After 183 story change

Copy from some another novel which is past publication

Copy cat from another novel after 183 chapters

Kindly notify authors or this site administrator

It's fun story before 350 but after that too much otherworldly I don't like personally that part

Just good story until chapters 351 come

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Writing is roughly. Story was nice

Take effert to understand three world's past story

Mixing mismatch, sometimes jumbled

Somthing unimportant in middle os story

That's it upto ch119 reding complete waiting for updates

Good story upto74 ch

Waiting for updates

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Too poor no self respect hahahaha author mindset is broken same cliche of chinese counterparts are better than this atleast new adult writing in every 5 to 10 chapters