This piece is not only riddled with poor writing and unrealistic characters, but it also perpetuates harmful stereotypes that reinforce racism. The delusional perspective presented is both offensive and frustrating. It’s disappointing to see such subpar storytelling that fails to engage with genuine human experiences.

It reads like a budget romance novel or melodramatic series focused on the male lead, making the protege's actions feel out of character and unreasonable.

Let’s talk about preserving your time—it’s one of those priceless resources we often overlook.

First, the power system in this fantasy world is confusing. What should be a solid foundation feels underdeveloped, with random nerfs to our hero that turn them into a mere shadow of their potential. It’s frustrating to watch.

Now, onto the characters. The main players are supposed to connect with readers, but they lack depth and growth. They float in and out of scenes like placeholders, offering little impact on the narrative. Instead of evolving, everyone feels stuck, and the main character's journey is bogged down by contrived obstacles that annoy rather than engage.

In the end, if you value your time and seek stories that spark your imagination—ones with clarity and depth—it’s best to steer clear of this one. Save yourself some heartache and look for narratives that truly make your reading time worthwhile. Happy reading!

Alright, so this is the guy's first novel, and I gotta say, there’s some real potential there. I mean, he says he’s not a native English speaker, which is pretty cool. But, honestly, the plot uses a lot of tired clichés that just feel too forced, not really natural. It kind of leaves you cursing this dude It’s a decent effort for sure, but it definitely needs some polishing. 

Stopped reading...✌️

This idea isn’t particularly good, and honestly, the readability is just mediocre and not worth the effort. It seems to lack clarity and doesn't really engage the reader. Overall, it feels a bit underwhelming and fails to leave a strong impression. Besides being based on Naruto of course....

Yeah, so this AI-written novel is kinda interesting. It's got a neat premise and everything, but I couldn't help but feel it’s a bit off. It reminds me of what my story writer churns out when I'm just too bored to find something to read. The characters? They felt kinda flat and general, you know? Just didn't grab me the way I hoped. Overall, not bad, but it left me wanting

Honestly, it's pretty good! The author really nailed it with fine-tuning his AI for writing novels. You should totally give it a shot. Don’t let the AI assistants or the fact that it’s written by AI get you down. It’s worth your time.

So, to start off, yeah, you can tell this was written by AI. The phrases and style kind of give it away. It's also got a pretty generic theme going on. But honestly, it's not too bad. The author keeps it pretty chill, making it easy to read. Perfect for when you just want to kick back and not think about much.