Well! all i can say is compare to other hollywood fanfics this one rocks no.1 its sad that you dropped it.i really loved it. i hope you can atleast push for few more capters.

I don't know what to say but I think it's about novel you know potential to be even better the MC is smart and cunning I hope you won't ruin it by surrounding him with lolies please don't do it. what it's missing Is that you're not show MC personal power development and I hope he can develop into bit more lordly because no body say no to power even in these so call modern days only those who can't get something says it not good thing. Well there is much to say but no enough time anyway plzzz no lollies 😭😭😭