A sentient system. That is, mc manipulated by a superior force or voyeur. 

A sentient system. That is, mc manipulated by a superior force or voyeur. 

A sentient system. That is, mc manipulated by a superior force or voyeur.

I tried, I swear I tried, but the interactions between the protagonist and his childhood friend's "waste of time and word teller" piss me off in such an obscene way! I franzo to test directly with this, the novel is already small, but with 40% of it being useless interactions with FL it's pure irritation!

I gave up on this in Chapter 302 - 302: 191. Really going to become the pair of unmatched heroes."

Translation Quality: 4Update Stability: 4Story Development: 2Character Design: 1Worldbuilding: 1

Alright, this novel—which I read up to chapter 154—disappointed me immensely.The system panel is practically useless, the protagonist just goes with the flow and, well, things aren't going well.The story is very slow.

Now, the part that drove me crazy! This world makes no sense!The mage system simply couldn’t exist—plain and simple!To meditate, you need runes. But where did the runes come from?How did the first mage meditate if runes were required for it?Same thing goes for spells!And the potions—apparently you need potions to advance. Like, a potion just to advance to first-level mage.Yes, he’s still at the third apprentice level by chapter 154!And the potion is so complicated to make that it makes no sense for someone to just "coincidentally" manage to do it.The world is unrealistic and illogical. Even fantasy needs logic—but here, no, everything just appears out of nowhere with a “poof.”

A complete waste of time!

Very good! I, who have read tens of thousands of novels before, I, who am a rock of criticism when reading things, yes, I, I will just say a fact, up until Chapter 500 where I am now I LAUGHED OUT LOUD and my CHEEKS SORE from SMILING so much! 

Certainly a well-made novel, at the right pace, with good fl, everything well explained and rational. Absolutely amazing.                                              

This story is simply too much man, I recommend reading! It's unlike anything you've ever read.  Grade 9/10. Dude, what are you doing here, go there and read it.