Terrible, the protagonist is the story is not realistic at all, the guy creates a system capable of identifying and correcting security errors, sells to NATO and doesn't even consider his own security and that of his family, I didn't even talk about how the agreement with NATO is the NSA was that easy, it was easier for the government to take away intellectual property, of course, you can say that because the code is incomprehensible to anyone other than the protagonist, it has kidnapping, torture and countless other purposes to obtain information, before from this danger nothing has developed to reach the result of NATO and NSA making an agreement. One piece of advice, the author should not start with a digital security system, but some other technology that could cover an important market, thus earning a fortune, he would develop a more solid company, at which point he would face challenges such as spying on the industry and thus making a progression of the protagonist and his power, then the NATO and NSA phase would arrive, it would make more sense, it would be more interesting and better constructed. Another thing, this revenge thing between the protagonist and the teacher is ridiculous, I skipped everything about it.

Só há uma palavra para definir esse romance, "idiota", diálogos chatos, um protagonista enfadonho e sem imaginação, imagino que ele não consiga ter um pensamento racional, os vinte e dois capítulos que obriguei a ler foram uma agonia, não consigo ler mais uma linha dessa porcaria.

Author, could you remove the protagonist's explanation text for his new sister, that thing about a changed person, who wants to be A better person is very irritating, for him to keep apologizing for things he is not responsible for. I say it's annoying because, even though she's his sister, initially, in our eyes and his, she's a stranger who didn't have a good relationship with the guy he has, so there's no reason for him to fix their relationship in this way. moment or pissing on your own pride in her, this interaction seems like a contradiction(Chapter 5).

tudo é construído sobre a comédia de um menino que é adotado por dragões, tem a força de um e pensa que é, mas a forma como é facilmente entregue e reprimido pelos elfos põe fim a isso, a premissa da sinopse termina em 15 capítulos, pode-se justificar que o MC tem que “ser civilizado” e os elfos farão isso, mas a forma como foi feito não é divertida, interessante ou inteligente, se for algo que pode ser é uma decisão fácil do enredo , afinal suprimir a força superpoderosa de um garoto é mais fácil do que fazer uma interação inteligente e divertida para convencer o MC a ser mais civilizado, como sempre, foi pega uma premissa interessante e com potencial e executada de forma idiota e amadora.