Not bad to pass time. You can tell either it was written by a beginner or badly translated or both conversations don’t sound right and the whole story feels pretty stiff

The stories good but I hate the way people talk it just feels awkward this isn’t the first story I’ve seen where people talk this way and it just doesn’t feel normal the inner dialogue doesn’t feel natural the outer dialogue doesn’t feel natural

Genuinely couldn’t get past the first chapter it’s cringe as hell and just not very well written………………………………………………………………………………….. ………………………………………………………………………………….. ………………………………………………………………………………….. …………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..