List of reviews made by users for the Mummy Evolution novel.
2 users have written reviews for the Mummy Evolution novel and rated it with an average score of 3.5 out of 5.
2 Reviews
The novel is alright, kill to get stronger etc. etc. It's been done before but thats fine.
I however REALLY dislike the constant back and forth to the past and present. It completely fucks the flow of whatever is going on.
We'll be mid fight and then we suddenly get 3 chapters in the past. Then one more chapter of fight, and 2 chapters of a completely different moment in the past.
It's giving me whiplash with all the back and forth and is ruining the mood. From ch 26 onwards it just turns into a mess.
CH 26-27 present
CH 28-30 past
CH 31-32 present
CH 33-36 past
CH 37-38 present
CH 39-40 Carbon copy of ch 37-38 but different POV for "reasons"
CH 41 present
CH 42-43 past
-And I gave up.
Even though you've just begun, I can already see something special in your writing. There’s a spark in your words—a hint of the amazing journey you're about to create. Starting a novel is no small feat, and you've taken that brave first step with heart and imagination.