Kill the Sun

The world in this novel is grimdark, with the fantasy elements shining throughout. The main character is relatable, and the tone is set from the very first chapter.

But I must say that the writing is HORRENDOUS. The prose is poor, and the flow is non-existent. The main character's name is repeated like a hundred times in one chapter!

It’s painful to read if you're accustomed to good writing quality.

I agree that web novels don't necessarily need to have excellent writing as long as the plot is engaging, but good prose is STILL essential.

Nevertheless, if you can get past the mediocre writing, the story itself is a gem.

Before you read. A certain someone will die because manipulation and manslaughter are reasons for someone to go after them and kill them. Many people dropped the novel after that specific person died, one of them is the mavas guy below. So, don't listen to those retards.

My personal favorite of War, everything so original, well thought. The pain is real, my heart hurt at certain moment, and given the supposed state of the author during part of it's writing I understand why he is able to write tragedies. MUST READ, be prepared for the journey to kill the Sun. 

Its absolute cimena. I fell in love with the hints of charerter devlopment at chapter 300, the entire novel itself is fab- what am I doing right now? Am I suppose to be doing something else? 

Peak novel. Character development is one of the best I’ve seen in a novel.

Most people drop it within the first 300 chapters because of the changes in Nick’s character, but I think real character development should be exactly like in this novel.

Also, the power system, plot, character dynamics, all of them are peak.

Definitely a book that must be read.🔥🔥🔥

Dark novel. Very good, character development with actual meaning.Though the end was a bit rushed, there are very few incoherences.It is a very good novel whatsoever, definitly one of my favorites. A must read.It is completed. 

GOOD. Amazing world-building, has all the little details. However, something that is present across all this author's novels is compared to all other aspects of the novels the mc can be lacking at times, 4/5

This novel is absolutely amazing and it is by far my favorite novel I have ever read. I recommend this novel to anyone that doesn't mind very dark and depressing stories because it is absolute peak. The only problems someone may have is that Nick may be annoying at times at the beginning, but after chapter 300 it just keeps getting better and better.

This author is one of the best in terms of world building hands down. In all 3 of his novels out right now, his ability to go so in depth with this tiny incredibly detailed world, and then expand it into something huge is so captivating. Sure the characters can feel a little poorly written at times, making decisions that seem bad or odd to the reader. However, I think that serves a purpose. Seeing the character so heavily believe in making the wrong decisions, or even being lost in a thought that shouldn't be a bother, makes the characters relatable. Seeing Nick make mistakes and growing from them in mostly an incomplete way, makes the world feel more real. This is a great novel.

Another bang from the same author.... Amazing world building, Power system and character development... And also the action in this novel is one of the best u will ever find... If they haven't read it then u are in for some good s*it