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Nocturne
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Where to begin... (read up until chapter 244 at the time of the review)

Story - at the start it all was going fine and was very interesting, but it sharply fell. What was supposed to be a zombie survival with a system instead changed into a power fantasy with gods, elf, dungeon raiding etc. Everything is changing way too fast... This turned from a survival system fantasy into a power fantasy system with a wish fulfillment edge lord story. Later on the author decides to just throw away the last 220 chapters and just regress the Mc 1 year before the apocalypse, basically restarting the novel into something else entirely. 

Mc - The guy first started as a normal medical student that got infected with Aids by some jealous dude with a needle due to love drama. Now we learn he was a special military guy with a past, it's not really elaborated. The Mc is trying to be an Edge lord like during the whole story, which get cringe real fast. Acts all mysterious like just for the giggles even when he knows nothing, doesn't trust anyone for no reason given, acts like his way is the only right way to doing things, and he can't do anything wrong because he is right...

Powers - bruh... I can't even... this dude becomes a God after one dungeon.... his time powers make him invincible to all except god like beings, he can stop time, slow it to a crawl, make it, so nothing can hit him, got a hyperbolic time chamber, has no need for sleep etc. His limitation is his imagination, and if he gets hurt or caught off-guard is due to him being careless, and it also doesn't cost him ANYTHING to use or cast, his effin energy bar is just a decoration now... Here's one example, his stats are 200 points each meanwhile he fights and defeats demi god beings that got millions of points on each stat, like what the hell??? He hides his powers which is a normal thing but for some godforsaken reason, when someone ask about his powers he acts like its some secret he isn't allowed to share, dude.... You don't even know why u got it or how you got them. There's more, but ill leave it at that.

Characters - at first they had a purpose in the story and had a role, but now they are basically just pets to him to move the story, his brother is a muscle head idiot that does everything his brother's says, the girls are already in love with him and throwing themselves at him for no apparent reason. The first girl Caroline, for some unknown reason she was at his house in their guest room in a coma like state, while he was isolated in his room due to him being extremely sick and weaken. His parents legit left him alone for the day without even telling him there was a guest there, the very same girl related to the Aids incident. At the start of the story she was stronger than him, and she could help him fight and survive, her stats were like 3 times higher than his, but now all the girls are basically just there to have s*x with him.

To sum this all up:

This feels like I am reading a Chinese Manhua where i just gotta turn off my brain and ignore the plot holes and the inconsistencies. There's no danger for the Mc, he doesn't struggle, anything and anyone he meets he can defeat easily unless a literal God decide to kill him. He doesn't trust anyone and no reason was given, the girls are just there for him to sleep with him, the power scaling is broken, his skills are broken... the author should never work for a gaming company because he will break the game since he doesn't know how to balance the stats nor the skills he gains nor how to balance a skill level up. If he had just stuck with the zombie survival system theme it would have been an awesome story and later on with the right pacing he could have switched it into the power leveling and slowly add the elfs, gods, dungeons etc.

Also Those "DNO" chapters killed it for me...

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