Elydes

A pretty solid story. The writing is good , story and word building is also good , I read about 100+ chaps .. so far but one thing that doesn't make is 5 star for me is the mc himself .. ( there is and will be character development I know he's just a kid right now  but still doesn't do the job for me right now ) 

It's good but i don't think this is for me. MC kinda hard to like, his sassy-ness and sarcastic take on things supposed to be charming but i only get annoyed. Not that he's an asshole but, you know if you have a cousin that growing through puberty, he's kinda like that. He grumbles, complains, and laments, which, fair all in all, everybody does that but I wish MC could lessen the 'complaining' and more 'effort'. Also, the take on "ordinary people can be extraordinary by putting efforts" does not do well in this story. MC is reincarnated to the new world and i wish he could bring something new to the table, maybe like i dunno a perk for a reincarnated person? even just one is enough, it doesn't have to be super OP. In this story however MC is painfully, ordinary. He is not special in any way, aside from being a lil bit smarter than his peers. Maybe his special power is not giving up? but he grumbles and complains every time the butler trains him. I mean, you're getting a once-in-a-lifetime chance to get tutored to become stronger, maybe instead of complaining, being thankful would be so much better. MC teachers have done a lot, and the very least he can do is to be more serious and sincere in his training. Gosh, maybe I was crushed by my own expectation. Oh well, he's not the MC I would enjoy rooting. The story is not bad though, everyone should give this a chance.