if you said that you read the entirety of lotm and said it has better world building then shadow slave i would honestly agree. but 100 chapters in and you think it has better worlding building? nah you just wrong
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Spectator
Guys don't take this the wrong way, but ive read about a 100 chapters of lotm and i read 2300 chaps of shadow slave. And i feel like shadow slave is incomplete compared lotm, idk if its the world building but shadow slave worldbuilding is just as good albeit a little inferior compared to lotm. Anyone else feels like this?
first i would say the main character is very entertaining and he has cool powers. and the comedy is also really good. thats honestly enough to get me hooked. and other then that i would say characters are above average. good grammar and sentence structure. slower pace compared to most academy novels. and so far pretty good world building and general plot
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DeusMalum
I actually did, but still, it feels bland. Geninune question: What did you like in this novel?
i am not 100% sure but i suspected it. its either ai or the author is just trying to fill in the word count by writing a bunch of random words while trying to sound fancy. and even if its not ai the writing style gets really annoying later on.
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26thNight
TO EVERYONE, PLEASE NOTE THAT THIS NOVEL IS VERY OBVIOUSLY MADE USING AI IF YOU KNOW WHAT TO LOOK FOR.
WEIRDLY SOPHISTICATED ENGLISH. TOO ELOQUENT.
CHARACTERS SPEAK AS IF THEY CAME STRAIGHT OUT OF SHAKESPEARE. DIALOGUE IS WAY TOO DRAMATIC.
WHETHER YOU SUPPORT AI WRITING OR NOT IS UPTO YOU, BUT YOU SHOULD HAVE THIS INFORMATION.
kinda agree dont know why this novel is so popular its nothing special. this is imo a slighty above average transmigration novel
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veldora Tempest
The novels is over the top most times and it's getting to complex , even I am at a lost on how to rate this novel now , plus the novel containing many references and semblance to many novels and anime eliminate any uniqueness that should have endeared readers to it
🤣This novel is so wack! It tries to be deep and philosophical but that's all a facade. It's just saying random, long words and chucking in some 'yin and yang will find the truth' in between each major arc and making you believe it's deep because the author isn't making it plausible to understand in the first place, because it's not something to be understood, it's just gibberish. I feel sorry for all the people who've been fooled into believing this is actually something good and worth your time to read. Why? Because it simply isn't. It's a piece of s*it wrapped in golden foil.
its whatever tbh there are some good moment but there are streches of chapters where a bunch of crazy and random stuff just happen and you have no idea whats going on.
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Untriox
Does this novel really gets good? Like the start of it is really edgy and cringe
if you said that you read the entirety of lotm and said it has better world building then shadow slave i would honestly agree. but 100 chapters in and you think it has better worlding building? nah you just wrong
Guys don't take this the wrong way, but ive read about a 100 chapters of lotm and i read 2300 chaps of shadow slave. And i feel like shadow slave is incomplete compared lotm, idk if its the world building but shadow slave worldbuilding is just as good albeit a little inferior compared to lotm. Anyone else feels like this?
i am pretty sure at least the last 4 chapters had ai content in them maybe even the last 6
are the new chapters on this site ai? i stopped at 2315 on a different site
first i would say the main character is very entertaining and he has cool powers. and the comedy is also really good. thats honestly enough to get me hooked. and other then that i would say characters are above average. good grammar and sentence structure. slower pace compared to most academy novels. and so far pretty good world building and general plot
I actually did, but still, it feels bland. Geninune question: What did you like in this novel?
i dont open my laptop for like half a day and now i have absolutely no clue what people are talking about
i am not 100% sure but i suspected it. its either ai or the author is just trying to fill in the word count by writing a bunch of random words while trying to sound fancy. and even if its not ai the writing style gets really annoying later on.
TO EVERYONE, PLEASE NOTE THAT THIS NOVEL IS VERY OBVIOUSLY MADE USING AI IF YOU KNOW WHAT TO LOOK FOR.
WEIRDLY SOPHISTICATED ENGLISH. TOO ELOQUENT.
CHARACTERS SPEAK AS IF THEY CAME STRAIGHT OUT OF SHAKESPEARE. DIALOGUE IS WAY TOO DRAMATIC.
WHETHER YOU SUPPORT AI WRITING OR NOT IS UPTO YOU, BUT YOU SHOULD HAVE THIS INFORMATION.
kinda agree dont know why this novel is so popular its nothing special. this is imo a slighty above average transmigration novel
The novels is over the top most times and it's getting to complex , even I am at a lost on how to rate this novel now , plus the novel containing many references and semblance to many novels and anime eliminate any uniqueness that should have endeared readers to it
7/10 ragebate room for improvment
🤣This novel is so wack! It tries to be deep and philosophical but that's all a facade. It's just saying random, long words and chucking in some 'yin and yang will find the truth' in between each major arc and making you believe it's deep because the author isn't making it plausible to understand in the first place, because it's not something to be understood, it's just gibberish. I feel sorry for all the people who've been fooled into believing this is actually something good and worth your time to read. Why? Because it simply isn't. It's a piece of s*it wrapped in golden foil.
the latest 3 chapters felt weird i think there is a decent chance ai was used to change some stuff
The titles for chap 2379 to now are run through Ai, please don't let the chapters be as well 🙏💔😭
i am just going to keep skipping chapters until we get back to the mc
its whatever tbh there are some good moment but there are streches of chapters where a bunch of crazy and random stuff just happen and you have no idea whats going on.
Does this novel really gets good? Like the start of it is really edgy and cringe