it's pretty good storywise. decent read, don't go expecting peak from it, might have to turn off your brain at moments. amateurish writing, painful grammatical errors, 90% of the chapters seem to be his internal thoughts, which isn't necessarily bad, but is kinda annoying. the mc will be op, certainly not immedietely, but eventually. as for following canon, it's set in the 3rd shinobi world war in naruto, and follows canon to an extent.
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Is it a good story? Does it follow canon? will mc be op ?
what interesting first thought to have after killing people... could js be the 'it's not real' mindset that's gonna have you getting a panic attack later on or something..
anyway minato appears? flee on sight means nothing if you can't even see him..
if the reason you don't want to read is because he's a slave, he stops being a slave soon, and it doesn't happen right away, isn't that prominent in the story but is important in sunny's mind. It's pretty well written, not so slow that it doesn't feel like anything's moving.
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I dont know if I will read this novel or not. I heard that the main character was someone's slave and that's why they said he was very weak. The story was very slow because he was weak. Should I start? By the way I love RI, I dont care if it is slow if it is well written like this.
deep sea embers, not really mainly about pirates but give it a try, it's a good novel. also you could js find a one piece fanfic, i've yet to find any good ones though.
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I watched the anime of one piece I'm at ep (1089).
it's pretty good storywise. decent read, don't go expecting peak from it, might have to turn off your brain at moments. amateurish writing, painful grammatical errors, 90% of the chapters seem to be his internal thoughts, which isn't necessarily bad, but is kinda annoying. the mc will be op, certainly not immedietely, but eventually. as for following canon, it's set in the 3rd shinobi world war in naruto, and follows canon to an extent.
Is it a good story? Does it follow canon? will mc be op ?
the internal thoughts take up 90% of the novel... mind games... mind games.
very weird personality switch, i guess you could explain it away being shocked by the first kills and like third death.
what interesting first thought to have after killing people... could js be the 'it's not real' mindset that's gonna have you getting a panic attack later on or something..
anyway minato appears? flee on sight means nothing if you can't even see him..
(spoiler)
if the reason you don't want to read is because he's a slave, he stops being a slave soon, and it doesn't happen right away, isn't that prominent in the story but is important in sunny's mind. It's pretty well written, not so slow that it doesn't feel like anything's moving.
I dont know if I will read this novel or not. I heard that the main character was someone's slave and that's why they said he was very weak. The story was very slow because he was weak. Should I start? By the way I love RI, I dont care if it is slow if it is well written like this.
too soon to tell rn, could be though..
Best novel so far by Entrail_Ji
deep sea embers, not really mainly about pirates but give it a try, it's a good novel. also you could js find a one piece fanfic, i've yet to find any good ones though.
I watched the anime of one piece I'm at ep (1089).
Does have novel?? I don't think so right
fire picks, great romance in both of them, tbh i might js give them a reread soon cause i've forgotten the majority of what happened.
Have you read the regressor and the blind saint. After reading ending maker I was on a high for that type of stuff and found it. It's fire
"would you win?"
"nah i'd die. but i'd win eventually!"
- every time looper ever
i'll probably succeed, as hard as it may be. (i'm reading like 10 books simultaneously so stacking isn't that hard for me)
I tried to do that too.. But failed miserably
what is a 'shunshin'?