I see so the sturcture stays the same. Story progresses with the conflict and so the Goal to let his family love happy life goes more far and thus Character is required to do more.
System Detail Explained. He wanted a normal life which we won't get. Now, the First Act states his family needs a good life and the one who crosses him need to pay. That's the very initial plot.
First Half Conflict Progresses Further. Things have started becoming worse for Protag. Second Half, System introduced. System Assimilates and further as per the Database (seems multiple Systems Exist) forces to choose a most suitable Power for its owner. Good concept.
Protagonist Introduced. Situation of Conflict Arises with Tech theme introduction (minor). Conflict created and Setting hinders the Character to Graduate. Story moves ahead.
Now the First Antagonist has been revealed.
I see so the sturcture stays the same. Story progresses with the conflict and so the Goal to let his family love happy life goes more far and thus Character is required to do more.
System Detail Explained. He wanted a normal life which we won't get. Now, the First Act states his family needs a good life and the one who crosses him need to pay. That's the very initial plot.
First Half Conflict Progresses Further. Things have started becoming worse for Protag. Second Half, System introduced. System Assimilates and further as per the Database (seems multiple Systems Exist) forces to choose a most suitable Power for its owner. Good concept.
Date: 29/05/2025
Protagonist Introduced. Situation of Conflict Arises with Tech theme introduction (minor). Conflict created and Setting hinders the Character to Graduate. Story moves ahead.
Yeah it's that good
It's that good??? I've looking for something to read ever since I finished Lotm
Gonna start re-reading this 4th or 5th time.
Are you afraid of Chapters 🧐
It's good but, I'm not afraid of written words
It's worth as much as LoTM.
though i see the 4 reviews it has is this worth the read?
Writing a Novel in a Novel. Is he Genius 🧐.
what happened next... i request the author to release this novel