Asmodeus Reader Info Comments Reviews Favorites Comments Novel: I am an Eldritch Entity 3w ive only read the first few chaps, which is why im not writing a reviewthe writing quality is amazing, basically no grammar errors and well-written in generalconcept is interestingits just pacing and character interactions are horrendousthe author basically blitzs through an important convo the mc has with his parent with no build-up or setupand in general, i dont know how to put it into words but as you're reading you can sense that theres something missing, its failing to pull you inbut i dont know, maybe this will improve in the later chaps. i plan to give this another chance at a later datebut yeah 0 0 Wait, How Did My Digital Girlfriend Become a Sword Immortal? Chapter 264: Hands-On Teaching 3w hes really putting the "sword" in sword cultivator 0 0 Wait, How Did My Digital Girlfriend Become a Sword Immortal? Chapter 260: You and I Are Fated 3w first he was shamelessly stealing resourcesnow hes shamelessly stealing people lmao 0 0 Wait, How Did My Digital Girlfriend Become a Sword Immortal? Chapter 259: The Swordsman Beneath the Moon 3w translation quality dropped slightly and formatting has become weirdhahi guess good things arent meant to last 0 0 Wait, How Did My Digital Girlfriend Become a Sword Immortal? Chapter 247: Investigate! Go All Out! 3w the game has been stealing from these guys lmao 0 0 Wait, How Did My Digital Girlfriend Become a Sword Immortal? Chapter 246: Skyrocketing Talent 3w he really does love her feet 0 0 Wait, How Did My Digital Girlfriend Become a Sword Immortal? Chapter 236: What I, Yue Qianchi, Have Said 3w f*ck this s*it 0 0 My Living Shadow System Devours To Make Me Stronger Chapter 15 - 15: Sharing A Meal 3w this guy has you pissed for so long but then the author locks intrust me bro hold onthis s*it become so peak Replied comment: Traveller021 Yes same, you d*mn moron 1 0 My Living Shadow System Devours To Make Me Stronger Chapter 12 - 12: The Prophecy 3w i dont remember exactly but i remember somewhere it gets explained what was going onbut im not 100% sure Replied comment: Traveller021 I think the shadow is responsible for this 1 0 Wait, How Did My Digital Girlfriend Become a Sword Immortal? Chapter 208: The Saintess' Urgent Summons 3w i think the demonic blade might be a tsundere lmao 0 0 ‹ 1 2 ... 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 ... 35 36 ›
ive only read the first few chaps, which is why im not writing a review
the writing quality is amazing, basically no grammar errors and well-written in general
concept is interesting
its just pacing and character interactions are horrendous
the author basically blitzs through an important convo the mc has with his parent with no build-up or setup
and in general, i dont know how to put it into words but as you're reading you can sense that theres something missing, its failing to pull you in
but i dont know, maybe this will improve in the later chaps.
i plan to give this another chance at a later date
but yeah
hes really putting the "sword" in sword cultivator
first he was shamelessly stealing resources
now hes shamelessly stealing people lmao
translation quality dropped slightly and formatting has become weird
hah
i guess good things arent meant to last
the game has been stealing from these guys lmao
he really does love her feet
f*ck this s*it
this guy has you pissed for so long but then the author locks in
trust me bro
hold on
this s*it become so peak
Yes same, you d*mn moron
i dont remember exactly but i remember somewhere it gets explained what was going on
but im not 100% sure
I think the shadow is responsible for this
i think the demonic blade might be a tsundere lmao