I think author should learn to use comma in numbers. and also realistic price for things

Dude, why?

Jones is such a nice guy.

How useless can someone be, to have a metal rod, successfully hit the unknowingly target on the head and still fail to take him down on the first try?

I'm really a the edge of dropping this s*it. Why is it so hard to write a MC with common sense? One stupid mistake after the other. Not to mention the continuous mostake of not preparing since he go the system.

Hes got perfect memory, can understand any concept. has millions.

He should have hired a mercenary security firm. Read some books, train, learn self defense, got a gun. Move to a more secure house. s*it all his problems were cause by his own mistakes. He could have done all this an still have time to conquere the woman. What a waist of air.

Author is clearly writing as he goes. Not though behind it. no planning. It is clear that Mike was not supposed to have such a rushed background. 

Jane is getting on my nerves. Being a vargin does not make people stupid to comon sense.

This was stupid 

Offering up to a Million would make more believable. 100 million looks to fake. even for a story 

This chapter was a total disappointment. Mc was just talking to Jane, it was obvious that Jane was safe. Narrating the MC saying he suspects a trap does no make this chapter any less stupid. Author should have written a better excuse to make Mike confront Kyle

I dont know why. But when I picture her. All i can imagine is a random fat lady from one of Eddy Murphy's movie.