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First read since 2022 that really delve me to the novel I thank you for the experience and gotta love it for I want to story to read like this that lead me to the iwkta (that got drop by the author) so that lead me to read other story like this so thank you for the first experience 

one of my first novels that introduced this type of storytelling! I actually enjoyed almost all the characters on how they were portrayed ( those who know on why I said almost all). Not to mention the twist and turns and although the ending felt rushed, I'm glad it ended in a happy ever after.

You won't regret reading!!!

Absolute Cinema 🤗🤗

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This is one of the few unique and truly well written transmigration novels I've read. Absolutely love the characters and there dynamics. And the twists are the chefs kiss!

This is one of, if not the best novel i have read in my long time reading. Each arc scratches a different itch, the character interactions are CHEFS KISS, and the romance is the best I've ever read, the people in the story feel like actual people, and the main plot twist had me doubting reality for a while. What may seem like sloppy or inexperienced writing at the beginning of the story is actually just a set-up for a major plot point later on. 

However the ending lost a bit of the sauce that kept the story lighthearted, but it would be difficult to write a better one.

overall i would give this a soild 4/5 of a novel pretty decent for the author first novel. Though the start was a bit rough and also the end 7 prince and princess were just plain boring and it was stupid to bring amanda a s+ or low ss to fight sss+ beings that were also getting amped up and he overall just was acting really dumb near the end but i did like the last 4 chapters of the novel alot so it was a bumpy read but still was decent i guess

A good novel I think this novel will be normal because the synopsis can be fairly normal but the further reading this novel becomes improved and a very good plot twist makes me keep on Read it

I really like the concept behind this story, and I genuinely enjoyed reading it. However, there's one glaring issue—a major plot hole that only becomes more prominent as the story progresses.

At first, everything flows smoothly within the "mob character" narrative. But everything changes the moment Lock Academy assigns the Author MC to Class A-25—the class that contains most of the top rankers. This is where the inconsistency begins: there is absolutely no logical reason for Lock Academy to place someone ranked 1750 into a class filled with elite students. Even according to the novel’s internal logic, this move makes no sense. The protagonist himself explains that the closer someone gets to their potential cap, the slower their growth becomes. So why would an elite institution—one explicitly focused on nurturing the future pillars of humanity—assign a student with D-rank potential to a class full of students with A to SSS-rank potential?

What makes this worse is that in Chapter 55, it's stated that there are over 2,000 students in the first year. Assuming these are ranked from 1 to 2000, it would make much more sense for students to be grouped by their rank range. The MC, ranked around 1750, should logically be placed in a class with others in the 1700–1800 range, while the top rankers (the main cast) would be placed in a group of ranks 1–100. Such a structure would naturally increase competition among the strongest students and align with the Academy’s supposed objectives.

This decision seems less like world-building and more like a shortcut by the author to force the MC into interactions with the main cast. Unfortunately, it undermines the entire "mob character" premise and strips the story of the unique charm it started with.

The second major flaw is the gradual loss of the mob character's core advantage. One of the appeals of a mob character is their ability to stay under the radar—mostly unaffected by the chaos and drama surrounding the central protagonists. However, as the story progresses, the MC becomes increasingly entangled with the main storyline and key characters. This not only nullifies the original narrative concept but also removes the tension and novelty that comes from viewing events from a background character’s perspective.

The third issue lies in the inconsistent portrayal of the MC’s family. Despite supposedly having a supportive household, the MC acts as if he’s completely alone—rarely asking for help or receiving any meaningful support. It's stated that his father is the leader of a mid-sized guild, yet the MC starts off with no skills, resources, or even basic manuals. Realistically, someone in that position should have access to at least a few 1- to 3-star skill manuals. If his father lacks even that, how did he become a guild leader in the first place?

One of the clearest examples of this disconnect is the stock market scenario. Instead of asking his family for money—something that could be justified with a simple excuse—he recklessly enters a dungeon, risking his life and nearly dying. He could have easily borrowed the funds, turned a profit, and returned the original amount. This behavior feels forced and inconsistent with both his background and the logic of the world.

author wrote this novel in a very fun way it was enjoyable but at the near the end it had a bit of a fall still very good novel his other works is better than this one

An intense and addictive story, with a cold but realistic protagonist. He grows with each arc and is not afraid to get his hands dirty. I definitely recommend it 100% 👌

It's good really good. Author did a really good job making such generic concept into a great fkin story.

And when plot twist twists it really twists u.( Ifykyk ).