Getting a Technology System in Modern Day

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Terrible, the protagonist is the story is not realistic at all, the guy creates a system capable of identifying and correcting security errors, sells to NATO and doesn't even consider his own security and that of his family, I didn't even talk about how the agreement with NATO is the NSA was that easy, it was easier for the government to take away intellectual property, of course, you can say that because the code is incomprehensible to anyone other than the protagonist, it has kidnapping, torture and countless other purposes to obtain information, before from this danger nothing has developed to reach the result of NATO and NSA making an agreement. One piece of advice, the author should not start with a digital security system, but some other technology that could cover an important market, thus earning a fortune, he would develop a more solid company, at which point he would face challenges such as spying on the industry and thus making a progression of the protagonist and his power, then the NATO and NSA phase would arrive, it would make more sense, it would be more interesting and better constructed. Another thing, this revenge thing between the protagonist and the teacher is ridiculous, I skipped everything about it.

Its absolutely amazing. The story gets better and better. Of course there are somethings that can be improved for example the process of building random things can be reduced, like the description sometimes takes a entire chapter which is not required, but again important ones like the reactor, the printer they are interesting so it's okay for that to be long. Other than nitpicking this is amazing AUTHOR. HATS OFF!!

Wonderful the only flaw is that it has few chapters, It should have at least 1800 chapters...I really like the plot and the way the story unfolds and develops, and I sincerely hope it doesn't have a limited perspective like just traveling there in the solar system or just the galaxy

Well this novel is filled with a lot of flaws for people who read A lot of business plus technology novel but I guess you have to bear with it because it's only one novel in webnovel that genre is connected with business and technology.